Bar Stool Love (poem) by Dayvid Graybill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 30, 2010

nice little snippit of character study

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on August 28, 2010

Great poem Dayvid. This reminds me a little of a song called "Sometime Around Midnight" by Airborne Toxic Event, a local band from here in LA. You should check it out on YouTube and pay close attention to lyrics. It's the bar, ex-girlfriend with another guy, jealousy, drunken rage kind of thing. Take care:-)

Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on August 28, 2010

Go ... talk to her. I think this one is yours, really. Next one's mine ... you're always winning. Well, maybe not, but you win a lot.

Nice, low, quiet piece, Dayvid. Your sensual perspective is essential.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on August 28, 2010

I notice in smoke free taverns
you ready to 2-step Dayvid...

No Beer Brawls Aloud
Vickie

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 28, 2010

Sweetness and great images!

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on August 28, 2010

See, there's that cocktail napkin Menno-prayer I told you about! Pass the hat! One for her, too...Dear Lord she's an angel, an exception to the phrase Why do the girls all look prettier at closing time?

Love and smoky polish sausage,
Sage

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

Love the images that this conjures up, Dayvid.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

Friday night everywhere USA, 11:00pm

Been there, sometimes till 2

Patrick

Reviewed by The Poetess

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

I like the way this flows to smoothly.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

Succinct but this expresses a lot and invites the mind to imagine possibilities and consequences... ...thank you, Dayvid. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

I very much enjoyed this and the brevity adds intensity...

Speaking of bars, I don't think I have ever gone to a bar but once when I was a girl, just for the food. No, I think twice. For the food. Isn't that odd?!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

Dayvid,
Enjoyed..and hope she noticed you were there.

Blessings+
~Linda

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

Dayvid,

Love hope in four verses. Fantastic write.

Mayr

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

Wow Dayved this reminds me of my bar hopping days in the 80's in NYC. A well crafted piece of frustrated love.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

Now that is why I support the idea of a 'smoke free' bar...but that, admittadlyy ruins any hopes of a romantic atmosphere. Nice write.

Cheers,
Dan