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Hot Night, Cool Morning
by Dayvid Graybill → (All Poetry by Dayvid Graybill)
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Hot Night Cool Morning

 

Across the pulsing floor

Blinding sounds of music

Dancing dancing arms swaying high

Thin body flowing liquidly

Moving close to me

Brushing my leg hotly

Eyes lock briefly for good

Arms reach out

Drunk with passion

Heat steaming like the fog machine

Lips tenderly touch

Fingers feel skin

Bedroom appears darkly

Heaven comes down

Sun comes up

She slips out

Sadness slips in

 

2009 © Dayvid Graybill


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 Reviews of "Hot Night, Cool Morning"
Reviewed on August 31, 2010
it seems all good things end, good one, the first part had me on the party floor, cheers

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
I like the pulse of this poem, Dayvid..Memories can keep you going till the next encounter..

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
this has such rhythm ... "Heaven comes down sun comes up She slips out Sadness slips in" can't you just hear the music in the background?

Cheers,
Dan


Reviewed on August 29, 2010
she left you a fragrant gift under your pillow...

The Bump...Vickie

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
Some prefer it that way. The typical one nighter.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
That's why you have to lock the house down and hide her shoes in the closet! But this is a reminder of years gone by. The seduction and thrill of "the big night out," DJs, dance floors, no idea who you're gonna' leave with (all part of the fun), the hook-up, the chase, the ACT, the AM blues. Not always though. Sometimes it would work out and that's what keeps one coming back.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
Doesn't sound too sad to me. Patrick

Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
Good description of the bar scene and what it leaves behind. I can't relate, but this flows nicly.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
Sounds like you had a great time. Enjoy the moment.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
The sadness of the morning after the one night stand....well done.


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