ANNOINTED KISS (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 5, 2007

With your Anointed Kiss, hear this--

I was breathing hot and heavy
And almost lost my cool,
But then I knew you'd know
For sure that I'm some kinda fool.

A Pax, you are totally irreverant...and wholesome for the soul.

And for your information, I turned the speed control on your garden photo slide to slow. But when I found the stop button, I felt more
at ease, 'cause then I could sit and gaze in wonder without limit.
You have the most delightful, most enchanting garden photos I have
ever seen.

You'll probably find me here next week still sitting in front of my monitor drinking in all your poetry. What a gem I mined when I found your den! WOW OH WOW OH WOW!
God be with you,
Richard

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 2, 2004

Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2004

*** POEM OF THE MONTH ***

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT !!

D a n a

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

lovely

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on October 26, 2004

A sensual read...enjoyed

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on October 25, 2004

Dear Anita,

WOW !!!! this is absolutely fantastic, I realised only at the end that I had not taken a breath... you honestly captured the most beautiful moment in this superb write of yours. Thank you for sharing this exquisite poetry. Keep them coming dear friend.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2004

Lady A, the lips are the entrance way to the heart! This tremendously well-written piece just has all the senses reeling with delight! If more paid attention to the power of the �anointed kiss� there would be a lot more love and compassion, instead of all the hate and discontentment that seems to spread like cancer across the globe! An excellent timeless sensual romantic composition, my friend. Thank you for sharing it. Take good care and be well.

P.S. The poem �Fate In Hell� was based upon a woman I knew, who killed her youngest child to be �free!� Yet, because of her stupid actions, she is still in prison thirty years later! Personally, I feel she or anyone else who kills their children or for that matter any child, should be put to death immediately, without wasting the taxpayer�s money!

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

Lady A,

Lovely artwork! A breathtaking and romantically crafted write which delivers a sensual mood par supreme!!

Robert

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

Outstanding!!!!!!!
This rocks big time.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

JUST DO IT!!! My heart has lept into my throat with this one, Anita! Where's a brown paper bag when you need one?! My chest has a hundred-tonne weight on it (Hyperventilation!) Gotta love this one... TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

OK... if you insist. ;-) This is smoothly romantically beautiful. -- Jeff

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

Beautifully pennd
smooth as silk

William .....peace

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

Graphic image, sounds and verses complement one another to achieve the desired result. Well done, Anita. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

Wow! Left me speechless.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

This is awesome! The entire presentation art, sound-effects, poem!
Kudo's Anita!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

I could care less if it is "tasteful" or not, it rocked my boat.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 22, 2004

such passion!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 22, 2004

An annointed poem, Anita.

The drum beat is especially captivating with this piece.

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on October 22, 2004

This is a very tasteful, well written poem about love.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on October 22, 2004

Er, uh, ahem. Very graceful wording, lady. Belongs in hard copy.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2004

Thank you for just sharing the beauty of this, it's gorgeous and brought tears to my eyes. You can feel the love in every line.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 22, 2004

Beautiful package Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 22, 2004

beautiful write and pic, lady a! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 22, 2004

Very nice and tender Anita...
Peter

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 22, 2004

Gasp! This is so good. Sweet, hot, romantic... Love it.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 22, 2004

(((lady a)))

WOW--what a sensual, passionate kiss THIS is! most delightful...another one, please???????? :) (beautifully penned--breathtaking!)

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, karla. :)