Song Of The Sword (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

Now I like this alot!! Absolutely beautiful!!

Jack

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

I knew I was gonna fall in love with this just from the title alone... then the visual... then the form... all setting the stage for your delicious words that are like a healing salve - or even salt applied straight to the wound. Your poetic Sword is an Excalibur, Darlin, and conjures always such soul-stirring mystery as well as simultaneously exposing so much tender and life-giving truth. Like the precious incense of hallowed ground is this. A song of holy places. Bless you and thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

If not for heartaches and the like
Our hearts would never quest

Indeed..THAT is what makes THIS dimension so intriguing..

profound write..

I just love your work..there's not one I didn't like..not ONE!!! YAY!!!

Vesna:)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

So true.
And you said it so well.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

Thank you for reminding me that without the harsh or darker side to all things we would not be able to truly appreciate the beauty in the good. The graphic also really complements your theme here - super stuff! love Panda :)

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

Profoundly mystical, insightfully wise, and soufully healing. Exceptionally satisfying work.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

Truer words cannot be expressed to capture the roller coaster world that we all struggle and work to survive, between the teardrops and the smiles.
Fee

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

Beautiful poetic offering, Anita. You just keep getting better and better. There certainly is ying and yang in all things in life and one cannot exist without the other. Gorgeous photo for your graphic, too.

Take care,

Sherry

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

Such a wonderful offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

How right you are Anita, good things come to us through hard ships. Only evil is easy. Great poem. Victor

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

Gosh ALice ...

This flowed so easily and the thoughts were superb. You really are on a very cool roll lately.

Love the image - looks like light sabers.

Benisons ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

Such beauty in wisdom verses Anita! Your poetry is a joy to read!Thank you!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

The soul song is the message of honesty from our hearts. Some pay attention and some bide theur time questing for more and get lost. You have a spirit that enriches us all through your wise pens. Never stop please, because I'm listening.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

If not for being lost
New paths would not be found

As one who was truly lost a few times in my life, I believe this to be very true, and another profound poem, Queenie.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

Has very fluid and beautiful lines in this poem Powerful.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

Anita

Your mystical and intuitive side is well defined in this analytical and sensitive pen..

It is only when we have been around the block a few times, that we can really discern the Unseen..

Benisons

Peter