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Fire Place(Mildly Erotic)
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This was one of the first poems I ever wrote, its a bit clumsey...

FIRE PLACE

Standing so close, by the fire place
The flames from below, softy lighting your face,
I reach up and softy carress, your face with my hand
And know that your mine, forever my man,

Pull you down for a kiss, your mouth sweeter than wine,
Your lips cover my face,
Our love, one of a kind
Kisses so deep, so intense, so sincere,
Cannot hold out much longer, I need all of you near,

I unbutton your shirt, run my hands down your chest,
You reach out for me, and fondle my breasts,
My nipples grow hard, and you trace round their lines,
We push closer together, two bodies one mind

There is something we want,
As ancient as life
To experience each other,
Souls and Bodies unite

I hold your hands and kiss your palms,
You pull me close to you, so safe in your arms,
Our clothes, we have shed, they lay on the floor,
I am wet, you are hard,
Our bodies need more.....

I travel down your stomach, with kisses and licks
Your body it trembles, my insides grow slick
The prelude to loving, the familiar click
Our hearts are now pounding, our breath coming quick

You pull me up, to kiss your face
And lay me down, and take your place
On top of me, you slip deep inside
You are buried within, so deep you hide

And come out again, and again, with each stroke
Bringing me higher to heaven, until your resistance is broke
And we come together again and again,
Knowing its the beginning and never the end

Anita
11/20/98





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 Reviews of "Fire Place(Mildly Erotic)"
Reviewed by The Gentle Man
Reviewed on May 25, 2003
I love this Anita.....very erotic and sensual....nice work!

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on April 28, 2003
YAOWZAH! THIS is ONE HOT piece! HOT DAMN!

Teresa

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 19, 2003
a very lovely ending... well done!

Reviewed by Jay G
Reviewed on April 19, 2003
In a way isnt it appropriate that this poem should be the seminal event of your creativity??? For which I for one am very grateful!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on April 19, 2003
Oh my !!
What a brilliant start to writing poetry.
This is perfect..please don't think of changing a word. Mildly indeed! ;)
Chrissie

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on April 18, 2003
Don't change a word you can't improve on perfections. If this is mildly erotic, I wonder what pornographic means.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2003
Lady A. it is very good and erotice. Don't worry about changing it. You had us revved up and ready to go. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on April 18, 2003
Dear Anita....superbly done...what a write!!!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 18, 2003
Anita! you wouldn't change one word! When it's good it's good! ooolala...dens on fire;-)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2003
Nicely done first attempt. Would you do it any differently now ? Bravo. I don't know where my first attempts are. Probably the wastebasket. [smiles]

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2003
Well written I think
My first wasn't this good.....
write that is, hee, hee....

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 18, 2003
Wait let me go jump into oh!!!!! my bed before I get................wait...fall dead....I am fast asleep.....but wide awake tooooooo


Love
tinka

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2003
sigh...
the only thing I ever get in front of my fireplace is hot.
-James

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2003
Dear Anita, I wish I could write half as good as you did back then.


pax
tony

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on April 18, 2003
Whew! I'm tired now. Oh how I miss those amorous nights!
Jill :)

Reviewed on April 18, 2003
This was excellent! I wish my first was this good!

Beautifully done,

Reindeer

Reviewed on April 18, 2003
wow, lady a...for one of your first writes, you started off afire! :) excellent, descriptive write "it's gettin' hot in here" LOL (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)


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