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Exorcise The Demon(My attempt at being gothic)
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....... we invent conscience and prey on ourselves.  ~Elbert Hubbard




 

+=+EXORCISE THE DEMON+=+

Chamber of tomorrow, fortress of the knight
Armor shielding sorrows, dent and scar of fight
Built upon a high cliff.... by an icy sea
Melody of gray mist.... ghoulish symphony




Phantom legion taunting, shrieking cries of war
Anguished spirits flaunting...wounded, bloody, gore
Dead eyes mock the guilty, chained to knight by deed
Exorcise the demons, prey on bended knee

Lady A
Dec 2003





 

My attempt at gothic symbolism muuhaahaa







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 Reviews of "Exorcise The Demon(My attempt at being gothic)"
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on December 22, 2003
Ohhhhhhh very cool! Love the dark poems...I used to write all dark......but I'm sorta stuck on love....lol This is damn fine poetry.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 19, 2003
Would go well with The Lord of the Rings. Enjoyed this, Anita.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
Excellent write!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
Fair Lady A you've out done yourself. ;)
Very good!

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
Well done, one can almost see the mist rising from off the stones of the castle walls in the pre-dawn as the moon wanes... Very well done, Lady A!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
Excellent, chilling, dark write. Very well done.
~Chrissie :)

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
I especially like the last line, "...prey on bended knee." The exorciser using prayer as a weapon.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
Makes me shiver. I wear black all the time and my students say I'm gothic. I don't know. I love your write. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
Well written piece Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
Excellent,deep write Lady A! methinks you have some gothic hidden somewhere in that brilliant brain of yours;-)!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
i really like the implications of this poem ... yes, we must exorcise the demons within us and surrounding us ... all the devils are really angels wanting to be set free."

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
really good Lady A, it sure had my attemtion, all you work so great, al

Reviewed on December 18, 2003
This was excellently dark and chilling, excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
Lady A, Excellent read. There are certainly demons in everyone's closet which need exorcising.


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