I’m a dry little cliché,
dehydrated, itchy,
scratching my back with a cactus.
Talented mirages on T.V.!
An oasis of carbonated
not-too-sweet
treats
(sometimes the machine messes up
and shoots out
tap water.)
I’m a lonely little cliché, yes,
But the cacti grow as high as trees sometimes,
And hey this sand—if you’re in the mood,
And not too, too thirsty,
Could be seen as--future stained glass,
Or... computer chips,
But please let it not
spray your eyes!
Little clichés
Speak this way—
“Darling, darling, how was your day?”
“Okay.”
And they do not touch
Overmuch,
With what they do or say
.
But they may
Today
"I was touched today,
by a wet hand in the sand."
"Yes?"
"Wet hands in the sand can build castles together."
"Yes?"
"Yes!"
And they may. Today.
EDWIN
Regis
LOL what brilliant chiastic!.
Spoken from the sands point of view. M, Chip, or glass.
But what I enjoy most here, is not the perfect form.
But the innocence one feels from the write.
And the clever subtle messages.
Your writtng needs an out let..
Another superb penn...
Iloved your Sandman cliche/?- that is differ. and you are too....Awesome~! That again is wonderful- WArmly,Sheee
Sage