Zenith,
First, may I thank you for your many kind remarks at my site, I apologise it has taken me so long to visit yours, life bars us at times, but bars are meant to be broken! especially when invisable, and the enemy is a dog with a fierce growl, but NO teeth!
Im attracted to your depth and unfolding honesty upon parchment, for me there is no other write nor factor that counts more!
write where your heart leads you, then record what you see! As honestly as you can...
Oh by the way, powerful write lass!
Sincerely,
Rodney
Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Oh, oh, naughty naughty!
Alfred Hitchcock would have been PROUD OF YOU! (I know I am!)
Fabulously terrifying. AND, permit me to share this little anecdote with you. As a young gay lad in university, I used to fear being stabbed in the shower...
So there you go!
And I'm not afraid to share this with you, of all brave people!
Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA
BTW, Zenith, I have decided I want to see more of your poetry and that, FOR CERTAIN, I wish to publish you as the FEATURED POET for the WINTER 2004 issue of my general poetry E-Zine, POETRY IN EMOTION, which you can find on the links page, under Poetry E-Zines, on my home page,
http://poesieslaissezfaire.homestead.com
This offer is by invitation only.
I do not accept unsolicited ms.
So, Zenith, should you wish to be featured in that issue, please send me an e-mail to:
vallance22.coolgoose.com
When you send me your e-mail, I have a further proposition re. poetry for you.
Thank you,
Richard Vallance Janke,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA
Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Your poetry is truly artistic and masterful! You have passion from beginning to end, and profoundness from end to beginning.
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2003
"Some day when the beginning becomes the end"...everydays the beginning of our end...i do truly adore this poem, so very well written and amazing to read, well done...Mark ...
Awesome poem Zenith..
I suffer depression
and I know what it
feels like. It CAN
suck the life of your
very existance.
BRAVO on such an
excellent write~!
I get like that when I drink too much coffee or tea and breaking up with that one and only had the same effect way back when.
You describle fear perfectly but not knowing why would be so scarey.
I really liked the way you set it out....an excellent first rate poem.
The part about the shower reminded me of that movie of Alfred Hitchcocks with Janet Leigh and that creepy guy Norman Bates (what was the name of that movie?),she could never have a shower again she was too afraid too...)
10 OUT OF TEN!
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
Well presented poem Zenith......it definetly touches ones soul
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First, may I thank you for your many kind remarks at my site, I apologise it has taken me so long to visit yours, life bars us at times, but bars are meant to be broken! especially when invisable, and the enemy is a dog with a fierce growl, but NO teeth!
Im attracted to your depth and unfolding honesty upon parchment, for me there is no other write nor factor that counts more!
write where your heart leads you, then record what you see! As honestly as you can...
Oh by the way, powerful write lass!
Sincerely,
Rodney
Alfred Hitchcock would have been PROUD OF YOU! (I know I am!)
Fabulously terrifying. AND, permit me to share this little anecdote with you. As a young gay lad in university, I used to fear being stabbed in the shower...
So there you go!
And I'm not afraid to share this with you, of all brave people!
Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA
BTW, Zenith, I have decided I want to see more of your poetry and that, FOR CERTAIN, I wish to publish you as the FEATURED POET for the WINTER 2004 issue of my general poetry E-Zine, POETRY IN EMOTION, which you can find on the links page, under Poetry E-Zines, on my home page,
http://poesieslaissezfaire.homestead.com
This offer is by invitation only.
I do not accept unsolicited ms.
So, Zenith, should you wish to be featured in that issue, please send me an e-mail to:
vallance22.coolgoose.com
When you send me your e-mail, I have a further proposition re. poetry for you.
Thank you,
Richard Vallance Janke,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA
geez...intense, vivid descriptions--the shortened sentences just add to the terror you portray
EXCELLENT *BRAVO*
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :) (believe me, i understand)
I suffer depression
and I know what it
feels like. It CAN
suck the life of your
very existance.
BRAVO on such an
excellent write~!
~~Linda~~
Reindeer
I get like that when I drink too much coffee or tea and breaking up with that one and only had the same effect way back when.
You describle fear perfectly but not knowing why would be so scarey.
I really liked the way you set it out....an excellent first rate poem.
The part about the shower reminded me of that movie of Alfred Hitchcocks with Janet Leigh and that creepy guy Norman Bates (what was the name of that movie?),she could never have a shower again she was too afraid too...)
10 OUT OF TEN!