Trick or Treat (poem) by Zenith Elliott on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 6, 2003

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Reviewed on October 26, 2003

SPLENDARIOUSLY WELL DONE....LOL!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Truth plays subtly...on the lips of liars...

WISDOM INDEED!!!!!
Perfect piece..thankyou!!!..I hope it is taken note of..

Vesna

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

"misplaced trust, packs quite a punch
some hit their target
other's miss their mark..."----YOOOOOU ARE AMAZING!

Lady~you have no IDEA what truth does for a soul! Absolute wisdom each time in your den! I love your hell fire. Naaaah, it ain't hell fire, it's simply TRUTH!

Thank You,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Excellent creative write!!!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Much truth expressed here. Thank you.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Creative write, Zenith. I too have a taste for the grammatical.
Amor

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Thanks for sharing...

Reviewed by Cynthia Borris

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

A trick mixed with a treat. Great job!

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

wow what a lesson Z, and I think understood, :)) Al

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

A joy to read. And thank you for your kind comments about my poetry

Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Thanks for the smile
very interesting write .. :)

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

An unusal, but very creative write. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Very unique write, Zenith. Much enjoyed.
Jill :)

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

A+ for originality and creativity Z, great job!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Great! "trusting whispers, tossed like yesterdays news" What a line! Good work. You really hit the spot with this one, Zenith!

Carmen

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

What Verses!
"tell me your secrets...
incessantly murmured in needy ears
i will always love you
you have nothing
to fear..."

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Very creative form and so well written
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Zenith,
So unique and well done.
"milking every syllable
extracting every noun
licking every verb
until no more
letters can
be found

mission accomplished
now off
to
spread
juicy
dirt!"

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Zenith this was very intertaining! Such a playful tone, yet with truth! Well done!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Very orginal format for such a sad and truthful fact. Great write.

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Cute. Brought a smile to my lips. This was really fun. It was playful and showed a wild side. It's great to let your hair down once in awhile. I like this.
tell me your secrets...
incessantly murmured in needy ears
i will always love you
you have nothing
to fear...

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

"this is a Treat."
"trusting whispers, tossed like yesterdays news
can cause destruction, depends how they're used...
misplaced trust, packs quite a punch
some hit their target
other's miss their mark..."

Today!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Very humorous, and very good!