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Flowers in the rain
by Audrey C → (All Poetry by Audrey C)
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Flowers in the rain is a metaphorical poem written for teenagers and parents/teachers. Our minds are precious and take a long time to mature, but can be destroyed easily.


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Flowers In The Rain

 

 

A grey sky, stormy clouds

Rain batters fragile flowers

After months of slow perfecting

They are weak against its powers

Petals fall as live confetti

To the path, their beauty gone

All that effort washed away

A heavy shower, it wasn't long

 

Yet they cannot now return

Their time is lost forever

Another season, another crop

Old stems someone will sever

The plant will not feel sadness

Fortune relieves it of regrets

Because is has no memory

It neither remembers, nor forgets

 

But we are different, we have both

If we keep a healthy brain

We can tend the fallen plant

And help new growth to gain

But should we cause damage

Or destroy our delicate brain

Our time of beauty will be gone

Like the flowers in the rain

 

 

Copyright Audrey Coatesworth  

                 In the book 'Daily Life' by Audrey Coatesworth

This poem has been made into a song by Toby Huelin 

This can be bought from PLP Publishings or from Amazon

 


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 Reviews of "Flowers in the rain"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 21, 2012
I'm not sure most young people would get the metaphor.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on October 20, 2012
very excellently penned
budd


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