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Junk
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There are those people who turn every disaster into opportunity. Then there are the critical people in our lives who turn dreams into dust...

There was

a box of things

once beloved, then discarded.

She said my children
could have them.

They pondered them
with glee.
"Can I have this?  Can I have that?"
Curious boxes,
coins,  clippers,
pouches and paperweights
cool to the touch,
exotic to the eye...
The woman chided me,  saying,
"Oh, are you just
going to GIVE them the things?
I thought you
would make the children
earn the things.
It somehow bothers me
to see them
pawing through there  like that."
Stricken, I put the box in
a cupboard.
Tightly, I smiled.
"We'll look at them later,"
I said.
Later...months later,
she said,
"Here's this box.
Don't the kids want any
of these things?"
Bored,
the children picked
through them.
"No," they whispered,
"Why would we want these?
They are just a bunch of junk."
And so they seemed.


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 Reviews of "Junk"
Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on June 14, 2004
Bess, one of my fun things to do is ramble about in here at random...occasionally, I run across an unnoticed gem, and that is what I found in this piece of yours. Not only is the composition and flow of this splendid, but the message is electric. Excellent work!

Reviewed on June 12, 2004
An enjoyable, very well-written piece, Beth ... very much enjoyed! Robert.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2004
This is a very charming and insightful write that I have enjoyed.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
My favorite drawer as a child was my parent's junk drawer. ;) I have a junk drawer of my own now and if I have to move, well it's coming with.

Reviewed by D.J. Ludlow
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
Bess,

This poem makes a wonderful (and truthful)observation about the spontinaety (spontenaity, spontanaety, spontanaity,... aww heck you know what I mean)- and frailty - of joy and excitement, particularly in children.

However it got a bit confusing as to who was saying what to whom, and who was giving what to whom. I could not make up my mind if you were one of the children or a second adult or an on-looker commenting. The confusion detracted a little but it is a poem definitely worth the effort of perfecting.

Regards

Don L.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003

:`( I thought this was sad. I love old junk and my mom deprives me of hers often.

Thanks,

Teresa

Reviewed on May 30, 2003
Recommend them to watch the Antique Road Show more often...

May Lu, a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2003
Thoughtful. Gifts with strings attached. No fun.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on May 30, 2003
I knew someone like that. Very well written.
Chrissie

Reviewed on May 30, 2003
you must have been at my apartment..HA! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn. good write, bess! :)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 30, 2003
Bess, very well done. You know the old saying, " someone's junk is another's treasure."


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