There are those people who turn every disaster into opportunity. Then there are the critical people in our lives who turn dreams into dust...
There was
a box of things
once beloved, then discarded.
She said my children could have them.
They pondered them with glee. "Can I have this? Can I have that?" Curious boxes, coins, clippers, pouches and paperweights cool to the touch, exotic to the eye... The woman chided me, saying, "Oh, are you just going to GIVE them the things? I thought you would make the children earn the things. It somehow bothers me to see them pawing through there like that." Stricken, I put the box in a cupboard. Tightly, I smiled. "We'll look at them later," I said. Later...months later, she said, "Here's this box. Don't the kids want any of these things?" Bored, the children picked through them. "No," they whispered, "Why would we want these? They are just a bunch of junk." And so they seemed.
Bess, one of my fun things to do is ramble about in here at random...occasionally, I run across an unnoticed gem, and that is what I found in this piece of yours. Not only is the composition and flow of this splendid, but the message is electric. Excellent work!
This poem makes a wonderful (and truthful)observation about the spontinaety (spontenaity, spontanaety, spontanaity,... aww heck you know what I mean)- and frailty - of joy and excitement, particularly in children.
However it got a bit confusing as to who was saying what to whom, and who was giving what to whom. I could not make up my mind if you were one of the children or a second adult or an on-looker commenting. The confusion detracted a little but it is a poem definitely worth the effort of perfecting.
Regards
Don L.
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
:`( I thought this was sad. I love old junk and my mom deprives me of hers often.
When Kathy finds a small stray kitten some amazing things happen. Story's from a Mom's view of the love, caring and patience needed when a child wants to own a pet. Recipient of the prestigious Mom's Choice Award. Delightful illustrations!
When Kathy finds a small stray kitten some amazing things happen. Story's from a Mom's view of the love, caring and patience needed when a child wants to own a pet. Recipient of the prestigious Mom's Choice Award. Delightful illustrations!
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This poem makes a wonderful (and truthful)observation about the spontinaety (spontenaity, spontanaety, spontanaity,... aww heck you know what I mean)- and frailty - of joy and excitement, particularly in children.
However it got a bit confusing as to who was saying what to whom, and who was giving what to whom. I could not make up my mind if you were one of the children or a second adult or an on-looker commenting. The confusion detracted a little but it is a poem definitely worth the effort of perfecting.
Regards
Don L.
:`( I thought this was sad. I love old junk and my mom deprives me of hers often.
Thanks,
Teresa
May Lu, a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Chrissie