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The Troll
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I dedicate this to all those on Authorsden who have been hurt and wounded by mean and spiteful criticism, especially my Texas friend Karen Lynn.


The Troll



The Troll is a despicable creature


Born out of malice and spite,


It cannot bear your successes


So it comes out of hiding to bite.


The claws of the Troll are real nasty


Long and sharp as can be,


That will rip and tear you in pieces


To destroy your creativity.


Its’ teeth, like needles, are poisoned


Piercing soft flesh to the bone,


But your heart is what it goes after


And your soul, where such beauty resides.


Its victims are writers and poets,


Invariably sensitive souls,


It will devour your talent, if you let it


For it has none to claim as its own.


The Troll is a pitiable creature


A failure in its own eyes,


From its mouth only poison is spewing,


Hell bent to destroy by its lies.


Pray for this poor, miserable creature,


Heap burning coals on its head,


Pray that the Lord will redeem it,


Softening its heart with His Love.


Jackie S Brooks


25 May 2003


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 Reviews of "The Troll"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2003
They aren't real authors and poets or they would be writing, not harasssing like three year olds. Nice and thoughtful work for Karen. She and her sister are extremely kind and generous ladies. Love them both.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 25, 2003
very interesting write...

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on May 25, 2003
Jackie, I think you turned the tables on the troll. Expelling a quantity of good old vitriolic spume is occasionally good for the soul. I'm sure yours is doing wonderfully well today!
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed on May 25, 2003
"The Troll" was written with "poetential" words of the mind and emotional resentments.

This is an enjoyable poem, as a poem. As for the message, the Author defends her points

but she is also following the tracks of those she claims are the "Undesirable" ones.

"The Troll" made me think, and I am very glad that I read it because I have learned a lesson from it.

I thank the Author of "The Troll" for posting this poem.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


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