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God Played Guitar
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Charlene (my wife) said I should pass this one along.


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God Played Guitar

 

God played guitar in a rock-and-roll band.

The music got so funky everybody had to stand.

Their toes started tapping and their feet begin to move,

Their bodies were all swaying; they were dancing in the groove.

God never missed a beat and he could play by ear.

He was a rock star hero by the end of His first year.

God played guitar in a rock-and-roll band

His songs were number one all across the land.

 

I played guitar; I played rhythm-and-blues.

I put soul in my music and I sang about bad news.

I made people sorrow and I made people cry,

I made folks feel so sad that they wanted to die.

I played all my own songs and I played real good;

Folks soon learned to know my name all across the ‘hood.

Then I heard God playing with his band one day

And I packed up my guitar and I put it away.

 

God came to visit me just the other day.

We talked about my music and here’s what he had to say.

He said, “Pick that guitar back up and climb out of your hole.

Don't you know music from the soul don’t end with rock-and-roll?”

He said, “Folks need to laugh and they still need to cry.

They need a dream to live for and a reason just to die.”

Now God still plays His Guitar in a rock-and-roll band.

And I'm singing my blues again all across this land.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 







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 Reviews of "God Played Guitar"
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
This was wonderful Londis, loved this so much!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
WOW
loved it :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 18, 2004
Very fitting write for my blue days Londis...will save this one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on July 18, 2004
Yes, we need to laugh and cry both, and this poem did it. Excellent!

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
Reviewed on July 18, 2004
yeah Erin, I'd like the details on that. Thanks a lot

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
Oh, Londis... I love this! When you pour out your soul, you pour out your soul! (Holy shit! Ten ou words in a row... I have chills! ;)_You should enter this in the John Lennon song writing contest, contact me if you would like details. It's been so long since I've read, it feels like a gentle rain on my dusty shoulders. :)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
this is really cool ...


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