it happens, yes. that I fall in love with you like with fruit. with that peculiar lust of taste-buds caught (aware) between the anticipation of a pulp blissfully known, and (unaware) the revelation of juice - exuding like, yes, like virginity, just, only just sliced open. it happens, yes. that I fall in love with you with this peculiar lust that (paradoxically) slices me open – yes, like a fruit, just, only just about to be caught (released) in your taste-buds. it happens, yes… it happens.
Now that's a love poem!!! I sway away from love poetry because it is so hard to find them without the "stars and moon in your eyes" effects. This is true poetry of the heart! Loved it!
Why they say that Portuguese wine is more inebriating, Portuguese figs more sweet in nectar and Portuguese women more...?
It happens that reading your poems I want kind of cuddling.
Sweet and delightful.
Georg
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2007
You use a great similie for love. Fruit is always delicious. Victor
And the beauty of this is that in can happen again and again dear Alexandra. This is a delightful sensual write that almost makes fruit the protagonist.
I always feel blessed after reading you - like I've been immersed in another culture and way of thinking. DUH! (-: Love the surreal aspects of that awesome image. Kudos to the artist! WOW! Blessings to you, and thanks for your friendship and encouraging words of review.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
it happens, yes,
when your eyes,
which have seen so much
of the best and worst in life,
look upon me with love.
it happens, yes,
when I anticipate the taste
of fruit juices on your lips.
it happens, yes,
that I fall in love with you,
like a virgin,
over and over, again.
Amo te muito,
Teu Joseph
It happens that reading your poems I want kind of cuddling.
Sweet and delightful.
Georg
good one, Alexandria ... delightful ambiance ...
the sensuality oozes with joy...
Regis
I always feel blessed after reading you - like I've been immersed in another culture and way of thinking. DUH! (-: Love the surreal aspects of that awesome image. Kudos to the artist! WOW! Blessings to you, and thanks for your friendship and encouraging words of review.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard
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