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A Love gone Awry
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~A Love gone Awry~

Innate young love coupled a
popular beauty queen and most
handsome in high school...hugs
and kisses in a sharp baby blue 54
Ford fogging up the windshield on
Dison street getting way too serious

Mother of beauty queen intervened
demanded a break up claiming way
too much life ahead to explore
sending them on separate journeys

Now more than 50 years later
a hindsight of worthy remembrances

(c) A Love gone Awry
07February2013
Vivian L Dawson


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 Reviews of "A Love gone Awry"
Reviewed by lois christensen
Reviewed on August 29, 2014
I cannot relate much as I didn't date in highschool, but love did come to me later. this is a good read though, makes me think what I missed out on at times.

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on February 19, 2013
Reminds me of that movie with Natalie Wood and Warren Beatty...

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2013
This story has been experienced by so many of us; does Mother know best? Only time can tell. The Steamy Windows reference made me smile fondly, don't think it gets any better.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 9, 2013
Those were the days… Could you have been the one who was separated by your mother? It certainly does bring back the memories. Foggy windows, getting stuck, and running the battery down playing the radio. That's why I held off, even through college.

Ron

Reviewed on February 9, 2013
Ah the wisdom of this young lass :)
And you have painted this high school
romance of the most popular quite well...
At least she was wise enough to think of her future
not taking the chance to stunt it prematurely...

Well done Lady Vivian

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 9, 2013
Hindsight and Remembrances - both a part of life.

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2013
Awwww....remembrances do you good

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on February 8, 2013
I married that man and stayed with him for 32 years. Now happily divorced. If it wasn't for my beautiful children I would have wanted my mother to do what yours did. .
Peace and love
Amber

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2013
REMEMBERING....THE YESTERDAYS...OF YOUNG LOVE AND FAMILY INTERVENTION...LOVIN THIS ONE,,THANKS VIVIAN...ANNA
...

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 8, 2013
those rememberances of youthful passion how glorious
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 8, 2013
Yes indeed, you have kept the hindsight, which may or may not be as good as the real thing. God! . . . Do I ever remember fogging up those windows. Damn!


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