Ideal poem, my type, Love Swans on the Lake, and love the lovers hearts can be traversing to the stars. Nature sure does help love along when it comes to one.

Very pretty, calm and graceful.

...captivating poem Vivian...in so few words
but...layers of metaphors...symbolism and so
characteristic for your wonderful writing...rich
undertones...it sings...It sings the fairy-tale
song of "out of this world"'s love/faith/destiny.

...two choreographed shadows dance the devotion
rhythm...symphony of human spirit...hovering above
the shore of Swans Lake...place...where once before
...pure in heart man proclaimed his love...in
a most memorable story of star-crossed lovers.

Thank you Vivian, for your poetic/intellectual
regale...Feast...I needed sooooo much.

beautifully written vivian..anna

In a Swans Lake sounds like a marvelous place to be.

very romantic write. i enjoyed the imagery and flow.

such soft images and words...beautifully put together

Magical and mysterious, Vivian. I love the voice, tone and images this conveys. xx

Certainly romantic Vivian, as are most of your poetry!

Always,

Deborah

A poem that manages to bring in all of the elements of love into a very few phrases of vivid remembrance.

Ron

wonderful imagery
budd

What beautiful lovers verses Jk

Beautiful write!!!!

Sandie

. . . and love surrenders its grandeur forevermore, tripping the light fantastic with soft words for her ears only as the malleable, thick grass gives of itself to cushion the softness of the lovely woman who is enthralled within his grasp . . .