Footprints of you in my bed excite
a wild ness of thoughts bringing
on an aurora borealis of ecstasies
with promises of I Love You to the
moon and back around to the sun
(c) in for the Night
24March2013
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2013
A real Indian Love call for sure. That's a great phrase; an aurora borealis of ecstasies, conjures up the central theme of the poem. Haven't seen the Northern Lights since I was a child and it's nice to be reminded of those chilly nights.
A fascinating view of the aurora borealis lighting the sky and warming fires lighting the teepees. There must've been a lot of lovemaking under those Buffalo skins to keep warm on those below zero winter nights.
WoW! Vivian, you took it to the limit with these five exceptional lines of poetry. When I read the very first line I knew I was in for a mind-blower, and you did . . . not . . . disappoint . . . me. There is enough energy and absolute power in this poem that a four hundred novel could be written from it. Stand. Take a bow. Curtsy. Whatever. Clap.Clap Bravo . . .
Ron
...delectable, dearest Vivian... simply delectable...
Always,
Deborah
"WOW!" Aurora borealis beautiful the night of passion.
Lady Mary Ann
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