~Overlay Within~ warm comforting winds
mind full of images
soothing sounds filling any gaps
here moon reflected
the paradise of you
how it feels to hold you tight against my breasts
becoming a human tide
daunting fervent love
becoming as the sun also rises
(c) Overlay Within
13April2013
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2013
You have cleverly created a breathless feel to this piece by using the illustrative fragment technique, it's hard to pull off but you have done well here.
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Blessings,
Christine
Regis
love & peace be with you
William
Ron
Beautiful within the heart of passion as the sun also rises.
Lovely image and beautifully penned.
Lady Mary Ann
budd
daunting fervent love
becoming
as the sun also rises"
Beautiful poetry, Vivian . . . Enough said . . .