Graced by heaven, angel kissed
grass colored my eyes and told the
sky to put it's azure in yours gifting
our commitment to behold windows
to our souls spectrum enhanced
Barefoot and free our meadow glen
fireflies twinkle and glow amour
night after day as surely as your
letters scripted with love I come
here to read until the panels dividing
my parasol become us indivisible
(c) Sealed with a Kiss
07May2013
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2013
Your poem has the same sixties air about it as the song of the same title. A sort of innocence we seem to have lost along the way. I like the romantic idea if having a special place to read love letters. An elegant little poem.
Oh, another beautiful poem, Vivian, with it's enchanting
and aesthetic powers...you really know how to impact...
others...in a way that's hard not to reach out.
Often wander barefoot, when visiting my favourite park
with little beach, enjoying the ticklish sensation beneath
my feet.
It makes me feel close to nature, alive and free...inspired
to write, paint, live my day-to-day life.
My kind of little paradise.
Love your carefree photo that says it all.
Warm regards Isabella.
Quite clever the last couple of lines, as was the complete poem, Vivian, it's just the last two lines lept out at me in such a familiar way as to give me a knowing smile.
Who knew the Wright's had a trunk full of hidden family secrets? Searching for treasure and hidden family secrets is one way to fuel the flames of passion.
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and aesthetic powers...you really know how to impact...
others...in a way that's hard not to reach out.
Often wander barefoot, when visiting my favourite park
with little beach, enjoying the ticklish sensation beneath
my feet.
It makes me feel close to nature, alive and free...inspired
to write, paint, live my day-to-day life.
My kind of little paradise.
Love your carefree photo that says it all.
Warm regards Isabella.
Beauty and romantic this glow of amour.
Lady Mary Ann