She read the sky and predicted
as the earth moves around the sun
he will come for consummation
overflowing their love unto the canyons
of their minds combining bodies divine
(c) Anticipation
10June2013
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviews of "Anticipation"
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2013
Very erotic and drippiing with double entendre. Appropriate poem for the hot days of summer.
Stunning and sensual writing, Vivian.
Love the way you matched the photo
with the verse. Perfect and captivating
fit for each other.
With warm regards Isabella.
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2013
You have heard it said, "she undressed him with her eyes..." Well your speaker almost seems to be undressing him with her lines.
Another in a series of sensually evocative pithily penned poems, Vivian.
oh sweet surrender Lady Vivian
this is sensual nectar
spilling passionately
on our thoughts...
Moonspun Romantics &
Kissing with the Crickets
Vickie
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2013
Becoming as one, short but so much info in five
verses, Vivian...Never stop your poetic lines
of the human condition for we all thrive on what
you see.
He saw the sky and he understood
she was the one who made the earth move
awaiting alone for his key to her lock
where love awaits in the valley of decorum
he tosses the key leaving decorum behind
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Love & Peace
William
Love the way you matched the photo
with the verse. Perfect and captivating
fit for each other.
With warm regards Isabella.
Another in a series of sensually evocative pithily penned poems, Vivian.
Roger
this is sensual nectar
spilling passionately
on our thoughts...
Moonspun Romantics &
Kissing with the Crickets
Vickie
verses, Vivian...Never stop your poetic lines
of the human condition for we all thrive on what
you see.
Always,
Deborah
Ron
Regis
Beautiful! Love this!
Love and blessings,
+Linda
budd
Beautiful love overflowing.
Lady Mary Ann
she was the one who made the earth move
awaiting alone for his key to her lock
where love awaits in the valley of decorum
he tosses the key leaving decorum behind