What A Man Wants For Valentine’s Day By Handsum-Hart
Nice is chocolate candy But quick is its melting joy And behind it leaves, calories of many That will fatten his tummy Making it less attractive to her
Fragrant are flowers But daily do they wilt And soon his air They will aromatize no more Leaving him feeling sad
Cool are cards Displaying words of affection But soon forgotten are words Not written by his lover
What he does want Is for her, to secretly write Notes of love All over her body That are sweeter than candy More fragrant than flowers And cooler than cards
And he will use his tongue, as a finger And braille read her all over
From the small pockets Behind her ankle bones To the unseeable nooks and crannies Inside her button of belly
From the soft rounding Of her lobes of ear To the fingernail thin ridges On the tips of her front teeth
The entirety of her body His tongue will explore And find every note of love She has written
And along the way A few love-notes of his own He will write upon her heart
Lady of love Won't you write for your man On this day of Valentine's Time
Every time I think you've outdone yourself, you do something even better!
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on February 28, 2005
Perfect! I think you really captured every man's heart in this one. nothing bad there just the man's heart of a perfect valentines gift!
You are special!
Thank You
Love Tracey xo
Oh Ron, only you could express love, passion and romance in your usual sensuous way.
And he will use his tongue, as a finger
And braille read her all over---> exquisite description. The whole poem vivified with luscious imagery. Penned with grace and oodles of charm Ron ;)
Whew what a steamy write. You are right about what men want. Women love the chocs, flowers and soppy cards but men could easily dispense with these things and get onto what really matters to them. Perhaps the accoutrements are merely used as a persuasive tactic. mmmm chocolate really does taste better on skin.
Great poem Handsum. Your lady will be a happy one this Valentine.
Chanti
Enchanted Desire, published by The Wild Rose Press, tells the story of a beautiful young college student, Shanna, who is looking for a fresh start and a way out of a bad relationship. She meets and falls in love with Kenny, a sexy 6 foot 8 Native Ame
This is soooooooooo beautiful!!! So sensual and yet so romantic!
God bless,
Sandie.
You are special!
Thank You
Love Tracey xo
Grand image; grand write - superlative all the way!!
Best regards,
Robert
what an enticing write
enjoyed the flavor
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
And he will use his tongue, as a finger
And braille read her all over---> exquisite description. The whole poem vivified with luscious imagery. Penned with grace and oodles of charm Ron ;)
warm hugs
Elga
Great poem Handsum. Your lady will be a happy one this Valentine.
Chanti
Love Tinka
The girl who writes to you would be squirming
in her seat in anticipation, as she reads this;-)
etw
Charley
xx
Best,
Carolyn