Allow me to doll you up In silk stockings, stiletto heels And a royal purple dress Then take you Across The Pacific Ocean By way of speedboat To coastal shores of China And under the cover of nightfall Let us do the sexy dance “The Flamenco Rumba” all night long Across the nightclubs of Hong Kong
Meet me on the roof of Africa And let us make a raft By tying five logs together Then float down the River Nile of Egypt As I pluck lotus flowers From its red waters And adorn your hair With these fragrant symbols of beauty That remind me, of the soft beauty Blooming in your heart
Grab your swimsuit and come play Romantic water games with me And let us show our love For each other To all of the winged citizens Who live above the sky By sliding rings made of angelic gold Onto each other's finger As we exchange wedding vows While standing underneath The waterfalls of Jamaica That cascade into the Caribbean Sea
But most importantly After our earth time has expired Let our souls hold hands And float as soul-mates Into "The Lake of Love" Known as Heaven And give a teary-eyed kiss to God And thank him, for allowing us To spend eternity together Swimming in the waters Of forever loving bliss
I agree with Cynth'ya, Ron. This is a romantic and tender piece, and for sure, "The World Is A Lovers' Playground" as Cynth'ya said. :P Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom youlove, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your sister, Barbie
This poem says "The World Is A Lovers' Playground." Saving this one. . blessin's, Bro Ron (hey, that's my cousin's name, Ronald--just started his business with us. . .) Very smart name meaning "counsel or rule" so take care of your business my brotha!
blessin's
cynth'ya
Quite a moving and upbeat prose celebrating life, love and the spirit within us all. In the end all that matters is our hearts and souls. Thank you for sharing your gift. My best, Gloria
Reviewed by Alexandra Riera (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2007
back into geer! Lovely to read you back! Comments might be boring or repetitive but you're good so there's nothing to it: lovely! and thanks for sharing
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2007
Well, versed, but my age shows, I was getting tired and about thinking how exhusting it all sounded, then I got to fly to kiss the lord good night. really good. first one i've read, so I'll tary off to some more. Lady J
Ron, this is exquisite, a beautiful expression of love. From your "Flamenco Rumba" to soul-mates into "The Lake of Love" spending eternity together. An exceptional write, Ron, a perfect gem.
<3 W o n d e r f u l <3 Sweet, vivid, romantic, imaginative. . .were I allowed to post a second comment, it would contain a long list of superlatives. L o v e. i t, Handsum!
'Pea' <3
HH, I've always enjoyed reading your romantic poems -- they usually made me smile and I loved the 'cute' aspect of most of them -- but this shows a maturity and a deep appreciation for 'love bestowed and enjoyed'...something more lasting.
Well done.
Gina
Reviewed by Wendy Deyette (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Wow ! What a romantic poem!!!! Great write...Keep it up.
:)
Wendy D
WArm hugs and love, Warrior Lady Purple Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
I started TRACKING/FOllowing your heart and soul, what will it hold, romance I defin. see - glory be-
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom youlove, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your sister, Barbie
blessin's
cynth'ya
Ron, this is exquisite, a beautiful expression of love. From your "Flamenco Rumba" to soul-mates into "The Lake of Love" spending eternity together. An exceptional write, Ron, a perfect gem.
Hugs and love
Elga
Love Tinka
Regis
'Pea' <3
You do luscious work, Handsum.
Elizabeth
Love,
Eileen
peace & Light,
josie
Well done.
Gina
:)
Wendy D