What Will You Be To Me? (poem) by Handsum Hart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on January 19, 2004

I am one with Vanessa, in that you had better
be careful that you don't get what you wish for!
Ha! A "romantic" you are? Yes...in capital letters.

Reviewed by J. Hart (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2003

Handsum ~ Exquisite!! Very sweet and easy to read ~ and to feel. Thank you. ~ Julia Hart

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Wow, HH, this - filled with imagination transformed into molten verbal gold - reminds me of the love poems written a few centuries ago! I'd like to challenge you: please write about what you would be to her. :)

Gina

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

This is beautiful poetry, Jim (my husband) thinks so too. He is a romantic like you.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 9, 2003

Very nicely done!!

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2003

Liltingly lovely....

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2003

This is absolutely beautiful! and very romantic.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2003

Tactfully sensual! This is beautiful. Unborn kisses.....LOVED THAT! Enjoyed the wole thing. Was easy to read as well. It flows nice. Having all of these things would be priceless!

Thanks,
Emilie

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2003

Yes..she will be ALL that and more..just send out the clarion call...no, I'm NOT kidding...write all that and send it out into the cosmos..aaaaaaaaaand..before ya know it she'll manifest...hmmm..I wonder what you'll do then...LOL perhaps RUN... for you may just GET what you asked for...don't let that minor point deter you though...

Good luck !

Vesna

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2003

Quite lovely.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on July 1, 2003

This is pure magic..lovely write..
Jenni

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on July 1, 2003

This is quite beautiful. What ever she will be to you just make sure you let her know always, always, always...that she is loved.
~Sara

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 1, 2003

This was beautiful and just outstanding, excellent, poetry at its best!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

One word describes this one...
"AWESOME"
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Trixie :)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

There is so much beauty in this write. This is totally awesome!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Donna Maris

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

I had so many favorite stanzas here - you touched so many parts that I like to think about.. my favorite:

Will your beauty
be my island of enchantment
secluded amidst the clouds
overflowing with trees
brimming with golden delicious apples
filling me with the sweet taste

I LOVE apples..=) but also the metaphor-
but anytime you want to shake my tree.. =)
Donna

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on June 27, 2003

An excellent poem!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 26, 2003

This entire poem flows like the calmest seas...so very soft and romantic.

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Well, I guess she'll be a little bit of everything - just enough to make you happy.
Great write
S

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

This is so good! Excellent job here!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

This is a beautiful poem. bill

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on June 24, 2003

Spoken from a true romantic
heart..:)
This is one of the best romantic
poems I have ever read. I will
be reading more of you!
A delicious write..

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on June 24, 2003

I agree with Jessica, that particular stanza is pure gold. ~Kerry

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

OOOO..LA..LA...This is very quite lovely, Mr. hansome heart..!!!!!!!

Peace and light,
Dove

Reviewed by Lady Peg

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

oops did it again, Sorry I seen Lady A above and then clicked this is as I said excellent poetry.
Lady Peg

Reviewed by Debra Wakefield (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

I agree with Jessica, that is my favorite part also. Very nicely done..look forward to more...
Deb

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Prayful ballet. Inspirational and romantic verses -- very nice.

Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Very beautiful..The Lord speaks to us through many things,,,,and this I needed
to read
Thanks
Mister

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Good Job!!

tn

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

intriguing and thought provoking write! (((HUGS))) and love, a new friend in texas, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

This is lovely, thought provoking and romantic.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

What a lovely write! Makes one think. ~SH~

Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Will your unborn kisses
be earthshaking moments
of loving passion
birthed on my lips
lived in my heart
retired in my dreams
and buried
still breathing in my soul

This my favorite part, but the whole thing is beautiful! Very good write! Thanks for sharing it with me.
- J -