What Will I Be To You? (poem) by Handsum Hart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 19, 2003

Wonderfully, delightful~I enjoyed the way you plotted out this poem~great planning....just the way one should~thanks for sharing, Ronald!!

Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)

Reviewed on September 15, 2003

Most beautiful and powerful poem. I love it.

Greetings.

Goreja.com

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on September 14, 2003

This was so lovely, A beautiful poem to read this evening!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

Another gorgeous piece of work, Handsum!

I loved this line best:

"Will my heart be the only house
your love calls home..."

Simple, but beautifully to the point.

~Julie :)

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

Hi Ron, a beautifully delicate write.

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

Ronald, I feel you will be a little bit of everything to her.
What a great poem. Love it.
S

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on July 30, 2003

You not only rose to the challenge, my dear Hart, you surpassed yourself and all of my expectations. :):):)

Gina

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers

Reviewed on July 30, 2003

enjoyable to read and reread in case I missed something in the first ... and I did..
thinking if I read it again I will find something new yet again

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on July 28, 2003

Simply lovely H. You really put the hurting on this one. G

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on July 28, 2003

Will my love be the actor
starring in the love story
playing in your heart
giving
an Oscar winning performance
with every beat of your heart
... Definitely an award winner. Romance is a competitive genre but this really shines. Bravo.

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on July 28, 2003

Very well expressed from a very well expresed mind...thanks for this pleasure...take care...Mark ...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 28, 2003

WEll now, that is a mighty fine poem.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 28, 2003

Oh this is so sensual. the pic is awesome

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on July 28, 2003

This was a visual delight, excellent sensual write! ~Z~

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on July 27, 2003

Oh Ron, this is fantastic. If you are all of this to her then she will be yours to keep.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 27, 2003

A very gentle but sensual extravaganza, love it!

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on July 27, 2003

~Exquisite! You held me
spellbound with every line.
Romance at its best!!!

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2003

This is an excellent write!

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on July 27, 2003

Hi Ron,
Beautiful delicate write...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2003

"Will my passion
be a chariot of fire
delivering the torch
used to light your ecstasy"

First I though this was a wonderful line until I read this one

"My ears are on their knees
begging your tongue
to tell
what will I be to you?"

Excellent come back, excellent write
Mister

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2003

Truly lovely, sensual and intriguing!

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on July 27, 2003

Ohhh..my knees are weak!!!!
Loved this.. :>)
Jenni