Is there anything hotter than I woman burning with romantic fever?
Fiery Woman, Giver Of Romantic Fever By Handsum-Hart
What is this feeling of extreme heat traveling like a woman’s ignited passion throughout my anatomy?
Fiery woman, why has thou infected me with your romantic fever? Were you born inside a volcano? Does lava flow in your veins? Because how else can a woman be so hot with romantic fever! Am I to become your inferno of love or shall I be burned at your stake?
Yours arms looked so warm and rosy yet fire doors they were waiting to shut me inside of you. Why cook my body over your campfires of hot passion as if it was a marshmallow? Is this not torture or your way of giving fiery love unto me?
My burning soul in earsplitting outcry wept "behold what I now be because of thee."
My thoughts burn with so much fiery fierceness my mind is afraid to think fearful it will set my brain on fire.
Afraid of being barbecued in this heat my spirit has fled my body.
My emotions so hot they blister my skin.
My flesh I touch not fearful I’d scorch my own fingers.
Now fireballs, my eyes brilliantly burn like meteors and flicker with flaming infatuation.
My soul now hotter than a lit match with dreams of starting a raging fire gave yell in burning voice.
"With all its might your romantic fever is hugging me and won't let go. Now certain I am forever will I burn."
Yet I seek no escape from this heat rather I stand, at my full height and holler within these flames of passion. "Oh ye fiery woman giver of romantic fever burn me around-the-clock if thou dare until residue of burnt flesh and bone I become!"
From 'now fireballs' to 'cold-hearted' you managed to draw on wonderful poetic imagination, with just the right touch of humour, despite the considerable distraction that amazing image you posted must have caused you, dear Hart.
Such exuberance!
Gina
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2003
Ohhhhhhh my..rather hot I'd say..but I guess one must play..while one can...phew..it's getting warm in here!!!
Vesna
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2003
Great poem!
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 8/20/2003
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Reviewed by Trixie Love 8/18/2003
The rose you write about is a blushing rose right now. How great to share our Art together. Love you Trixie
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if a poem can make your lady blush then you have written a great poem. this is so beautiful
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 8/20/2003
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I DIDN'T MAKE HER BLUSH ... I WROTE HER COMMENT FOR HER. SO THE COMMENT APPLIES TO YOU NOT ME.
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Good luck and God speed.
We didn't start the Fire -- tee, hee. But I hope the fire continues to burn. What a wonderful thing to share the heat with the one you love. I especially enjoy a steamy romance like you convey here. Nice, very nice.
:>) This made me start singing one of our local calypsoes here on the islands....maybe you know it...
"How yuh feeling?..HOT, HOT, HOT"
Great write, Double "H"..
Jenni
~ Sara
Nico
Great job
Amor
Tami
Such exuberance!
Gina
Vesna
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 8/20/2003
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Reviewed by Trixie Love 8/18/2003
The rose you write about is a blushing rose right now. How great to share our Art together. Love you Trixie
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if a poem can make your lady blush then you have written a great poem. this is so beautiful
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 8/20/2003
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I DIDN'T MAKE HER BLUSH ... I WROTE HER COMMENT FOR HER. SO THE COMMENT APPLIES TO YOU NOT ME.
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Good luck and God speed.
Trixie turns red in the face and says "Oh my
quite an interesting write."...lol
Great job...
Trixie :)
--Karissa
Reindeer
Excellent!
Best wishes
from
kay
Yet I seek no escape
from this heat
rather I stand, at my full height
and holler
"How yuh feeling?..HOT, HOT, HOT"
Great write, Double "H"..
Jenni
Love Tinka
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)