My Sweet Candy Girl (poem) by Handsum Hart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 11, 2004

lol...not only did this make me a tad hungry for some sweets, it made me chuckle...
This is a clever, humorous, romantic write with a sweet candy center of sensuality...
Well done, Handsum

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

I wrote a poem called, "Can You Candycoat This?", but I think you did, because yours is much better. Susan Sparks

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

This is cute.
Especially the last lines.
But tell me: Do you always, when looking at food or sweets, think of women - or the other way round?
Love
Nico

Reviewed by Donna Maris

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

LOL I LOVED THIS!
My SUGAR DADDY is an all Day sucker for me!
My favorite:

As my days melt to an end
like Hot Caramel Fudge
she blows Candy Powder
into my eyes
causing me to fall deeply
into the land of nod
where I dine on sugary dreams
about My Sweet Candy Girl

ahhhhh.. love is sweet! NICE JOB! Donna

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on October 19, 2003

Handsum, this is very creative and by all means as sweet as it can get huh?....Extrememly cute filled with delicious imageries~continue to have fun in your writing...Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 17, 2003

I am having a sugar withdrawal. Thanks.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 17, 2003

This is a scrumptious, creative poem! I love it
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

MMmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm...dunno how come I missed this... maybe because I've had my fill of chocolates for the week in 2 days... Loved this anyway...
Jenni

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

Indeed sweet! Good work! I look forward to more!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

This is an adorable, romantic write. Love it, soooo sweet.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

i really like this sweet write... excellent imagery...

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

This is a real 'treat', you know all of us ladies love it! ;)

Love, JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

Real sweet and creative write. Kudos on a write well done.
Amor

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

Sweet write! Very creative.

Reviewed by Kijuana Henry (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

I think I have my OLD FIGURE back! (Smile) You made me gain all that weight back! You have a great talent!
Friends,
Kijuana in Roanoke, Texas (Becca's buddy)

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

mmmmm my mouth is watering. lol Great work!

*Marlene*

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

Ronald,
You are such a sweet romantic guy.
~ Sara

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

A most delicious write! A wonderful play on words.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Wonderfully-written and very creative indeed! I like the pic too.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Somebody has a sweet tooth! (hee, hee). This made me think of modern bubble gum artists like Britney Spears and others and I didn't want this poem to be like that -- a modern quick hit without meaning. Actually New Edition had a song called "Candy Girl" in the 80s. While I love my chocolates and sweets, I'm an ice cream girl. Still the poem was amusing and charming -- a tasty treat.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Excellent and creative write! ~Z~

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Mmmmmmmm... mighty tasty treat, this!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Handsome..this is so very creative....such wonderful metaphors in this poem...a truly enjoyable read...floria

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Handsum Hart, what a pleasure to read this. I could almost see the fixed smile upon your face as writing this... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

I think I have cavities after reading this!!! This was a sweet delight!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Handsum, you are so innovative. I love your poetry, it's always unique, and your ingenuity makes it a pleasure to read!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

HH, I think I just gained 5lbs reading this! Quite a sweet treat. You write some of the cutest poems. Very entertaining. Lisa

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

This one is just too too sweet,I am pleased to gobble it up as a start to my day (first poem I've read this morn....6.55 a.m.) and it has made a delightful breakfast for this hungry reader,yum yum!
Also thank you kind sir for your lovely comment on my last poem
'Fool that I am' it was most welcome.
Best wishes always
from
kay.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

This was wonderful, very sweet! I loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

very pretty picture! and oh so sweet a poem!

(I love the ending...envisioning a whole family of marzipan bunnies)

Gina

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Hahaha, Great! So much good, sweet stuff in this one.

"I can't wait
for my box of Sugar Daddies
to adopt her bags of Sugar Babies
turning us into a family
and making her
my Sugar Momma"

Great creative poem, Handsum!

.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

I would put a "Sugar and cream and a cherry on top" for dessert! Excellently written poem! Loved it! Very erotic in some points! My you are some guy! Take care!
Love ya!
Friends,
Becca in Roanoke,Texas a rural community

Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

You got yummy yummy for your tummy and some happy lady I reckon loved this one!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Boy Ron that is quite a Momma! All the guys would stand in line with roses and candy in their hands for her begging, supplicating, and pleading for just one kiss to melt their aching hearts. Wow! Great sensual poem! Bill
P.S. This would be my strawberry and whip cream delight.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Sweet write from top to bottom!!

I prefer PopCorn....And cheese Sticks...chips....and peanuts!!

I salty .....and sultry....sometimes...hehehehe!!

But still a very sweet write!!

Love Tinka

Do you have any dental problemo's?

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Hi Ron,
Awwww How sweet it is...
Sweet as the one who penned this...

I remember those candy
bracelets and necklaces.
HA!!! I used to wear them
all of the time...lol

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Delicious write, Ronald! Well done! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn.

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Excellent work Handsum!

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Now this is a sweet and delicious piece lol...I like it.
Taylor