An Ordinary Man Or A Man Of Chivalry (Choose) By Handsum-Hart
An ordinary man Would buy eyeshadow For his woman To highlight her eyes But A man of chivalry Would capture The beautiful light blueness Of the sky Upon his lips and seal it In her eyes with a kingly kiss Highlighting them With the beauty of heaven
An ordinary man Would look for a breeze On a hot summer day To cool off his woman But A man of chivalry Would cup the wind Within the palms of his hands And command it, to forever blow As a nifty breeze of coolness Betwixt her pretty painted toes
An ordinary man Would write A love story on paper For his woman to read But A man of chivalry Would write a love story Upon his breath And blow it into her heart While their lips are locked In an airtight kiss
An ordinary man Or a man of chivalry Woman the choice is yours Which shall it be
Hmmmmmm, how good looking are they? giggle.... You are a romantic, aren't you? I love the flow, and the beauty in your descriptions... so breathtaking, like the sunrise.... sigh....
In Spirit,
Bear
I agree with Eileen. I want both. I would not want to choose. I think a man has to be some of both: ordinary and chivalrous. I enjoyed this a lot. One of your best.
I want both;-)Handsum, this is so beautifully written!It would be hard to choose, but the ordinary man is more realistic and more likely to last...sooooo...it depends on what your looking for;-)Excellent concept and great entertainment!ty!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2003
SIGH!!!!!!!!!!
"A man of chivalry
Would capture
The beautiful light blueness
Of the sky
Upon his lips and seal it
In her eyes with a kingly kiss
Highlighting them
With the beauty of heaven"
Nobleman's son, Todd Ramble, returns home after years abroad and finds himself falling in love with his step-sister, who was now a grown woman. Unfortunately their love is brutally challenged by his tyrannical father.
Blending Southern Gothic mystery romance, fantasy, theater, dance, music, and flashes of humor, tells the story of a pair of lovers in two separate time periods who find themselves battling an evil fifty years apart.
Lovely write...
alas chivlary isn't in..darn!!!
Vesna ..:)
Crystal-Rain
In Spirit,
Bear
Reindeer
Carmen
Beautifully done
Cheers
Laura
~Chrissie
excellent comcept!
"A man of chivalry
Would capture
The beautiful light blueness
Of the sky
Upon his lips and seal it
In her eyes with a kingly kiss
Highlighting them
With the beauty of heaven"
EXCELLENT Handsum.
Lady peg
What a beautiful write...
Again, it is so wonderful
to know that men could
reach this depth...
Beautiful as always...
Happy Holidays...
Trixie :)
Thank you for this write, it was excellent.
I will pick the one who penned this beauty!!
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Love Tinka
Amor
This is uniquely fantastic!
Very wit-wise composition to inspire and to strike thoughts.
Drink the dews of happiness for this work has reached its completion.
Thank You.
Congratulations!
May You enjoy a Memorable Season.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
FOR A COUNTRY OF LOVE AND TOGETHERNESS
IN AN EMPIRE UNDER THE SWORD OF JUSTICE.