The waterfalls of heaven Poured its wet glamour Upon my ladylove Giving birth to a flow of beauty Moving through her eyes Like liquid diamonds So rare to behold I staked my thirty happiness On just one sip of her eyes
Their wet beauty Glistening like divine diamonds Addicted me from the start And I savored each sip of her eyes My hands I cupped And filled them with her tears Yet somehow it was a handful Of newborn baby diamonds I received
She asked of me “Shall I cry you a sea of tears And give you uncountable diamonds” No thanks, joyfully I shouted Like a fool in love “Just cry upon my heart Until a diamond ring it becomes Then shine it with your love And wear it around your heart”
This truly is beautiful, Handsum. I love the images it conjures and the even flow and rhythm. ~~Bonnie Q
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2004
Beautiful and moving verses.
"
Their wet beauty
Glistening like divine diamonds
Addicted me from the start
And I savored each sip of her eyes
My hands I cupped
And filled them with her tears
Yet somehow it was a handful
Of newborn baby diamonds
I received"
“Just cry upon my heart
Until a diamond ring it becomes
Then shine it with your love
And wear it around your heart”
Where do you come up with this? I swear, you are the deepest , most romantic, poetic male writer I have ever known of. I'm surprised that you don't have a book on the bestseller list. Once again, the beauty you have drawn with your words has blown me away!
Crystal-Rain
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2004
You must be descended from the Knights of Olde,
my poet peer, to keep coming up with lines like
these!
Giving birth to a flow of beauty
Moving through her eyes
nice tribute
thanks,
d.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2004
"Just cry upon my heart
Until a diamond ring it becomes
Then shine it with your love
And wear it around your heart”"
Handume, I sincerely hope this dream comes true for you. You will make some woman very happy. Again this is awesome. I love the diamond metaphor and I keep forgetting to tell you how much I love your visuals....great writing..floria
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"
Their wet beauty
Glistening like divine diamonds
Addicted me from the start
And I savored each sip of her eyes
My hands I cupped
And filled them with her tears
Yet somehow it was a handful
Of newborn baby diamonds
I received"
Peg
Until a diamond ring it becomes
Then shine it with your love
And wear it around your heart”
Where do you come up with this? I swear, you are the deepest , most romantic, poetic male writer I have ever known of. I'm surprised that you don't have a book on the bestseller list. Once again, the beauty you have drawn with your words has blown me away!
Crystal-Rain
my poet peer, to keep coming up with lines like
these!
Diamond of a write Handsum!!
Pure passion my friend!!
Love Tinka
Carmen
Moving through her eyes
nice tribute
thanks,
d.
Until a diamond ring it becomes
Then shine it with your love
And wear it around your heart”"
Handume, I sincerely hope this dream comes true for you. You will make some woman very happy. Again this is awesome. I love the diamond metaphor and I keep forgetting to tell you how much I love your visuals....great writing..floria