heartless sea calling out to me calling all who enter to remain in your brimy clandestine deep holding all secrets below calm on top, with swirling under tows
sending in crashing waves to white foam misty frothy shores spirits of the deep dancing in frivolity's abandon to the music of the surf and shells beacon all to enter, come dwell
undersea landscapes of ornate beauty valleys deep and mountains tall coral reefs teeming with life living house that's become a home maybe your not so heartless after all just calling all your children home
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Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2003
I love the flow of imagery in the verses. it is true life is like the sea and it comes and leaves in strength...
Thankyou for this one
PJ
:) This is wonderful, Cheryl! The imagery rocks, the flow lashes and the ending brings an image of starting life in the sea, reentery and a second chance. Lovely.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2003
Cheryl, heartless it srats and heartfelt it ended; like you change your mind during the trip. Appears to me that your personality quickly changes directions. Bill Muray
The gifted and fascinating Urban Poet, Asa D Seeley, once again speaks. He introduces a New Genre of Poetry...Reality Confrontation. Juxtaposed with Essay and staying true to his unique style, Asa brings a breath of...fresh air...to the world of poet
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Thankyou for this one
PJ
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