being of oral mind and body I write this poem in rhyme time say with me the words in kind
fresh on your breath like a lovers tryst tripping over your tongue in oral bliss deep in your ardent embodied soul exhale it back in a sweet fragrant kiss
sweet angelic body of hidden pleasure seeking raptures captured, treasures blessing me with calculate measures of a cosmic beatitude sublime rhyme
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Reviews of "Oral Mind&Body"
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2003
It works,
Excellent poem
"sweet angelic body of hidden pleasure
seeking raptures captured, treasures
blessing me with calculate measures
of a cosmic beatitude sublime rhyme"
PJ
After losing her boyfriend in a accident, Alecia believe she's been seeing him. But that can't possibly be? When Brayden reveals himself, or his soul, he asks her of a favor. But when that favor leads to her revealing feelings for her dead boyfriends
Excellent poem
"sweet angelic body of hidden pleasure
seeking raptures captured, treasures
blessing me with calculate measures
of a cosmic beatitude sublime rhyme"
PJ
n oral delight
good write,
john+
Reindeer