throwing back the curtains of life opening a window to let the sunshine in watching all my troubles float out on the wind look there is hope perch on the windowsill please oh please do come in putting out the bread crumbs of faith and even a cup of the milk and kindness thinking if I open another window I will air out the blanket and sheets of sloth and wrath bring in a comforter off the back clothe line of the air sweeten blessed peace to mankind recycling the News Papers of dark obituary choosing to bring in the self help adds going up to the dusty attic in my mind unpacking the boxes of self depreciation cutting them up and tying them in string they never have a place to be stored again I plan to cleaning out the rafters of the cobwebs of wasted time when I finish all those weighty task going to have a Herculean cup of herb tea ginger and Jasmine to refresh my soul maybe even a cup of red or white zinger for the new improved awakened me
This is a fantastic write Cheryl! Vivid imagery and creative wording!
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
nice write
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Cheryl...I just love the metaphors you use in this poem...excellent write...I so enjoyed reading it....floria
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
You are original. Your mind goes where few can fathom. Your insight is amazing. All this and you are one good looking chick. Very good poem. Cheryl, I'm saving this one.
The gifted and fascinating Urban Poet, Asa D Seeley, once again speaks. He introduces a New Genre of Poetry...Reality Confrontation. Juxtaposed with Essay and staying true to his unique style, Asa brings a breath of...fresh air...to the world of poet
Major League ballplayer Justin Moore is kidnapped from his own ballpark and transported to a foreign land. It might take high-level international negotiations to free him. Or maybe he will take matters into his own hands.
Imogene, a country-bred girl, longs to make a life for herself in New York City. She joins forces with her former college roommate to start a movie production company in the big city.
i love the new and improved you, and i loved the "old" you :)
wonderful, vivid, inspirational write--well done--a keeper to my library
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)