sun bleached red with rust spots over it's body over heated sitting in the afternoon harvest sun shafts of ungleaned stalks forgotten and left behind shroud the body of this dear old friend in days gone by when this tractor was new gleaming in the sun, we both were young now to match it's aged rust, I ware liver spots too farm house across the field, as faded as we once a soft shade of pearl white with strong green now sits aged and muted gray with moss soft trim times removed all the sharp edges, in it's place leaving us all callused, harsh and rough to the touch having had a long and fruitful wonder of a life we retired to the barn of many declined winters for the last of autumn's harvest moon wanes I will remove all vestiges of soil from the field place a tarp over this old soldiers work worn back pull the barn doors close, walk across the bare yard to my beloved sweet wife waiting dinner in the shade This small American farm has retired as of this day
Wonderful write Cheryl, yes our America is slowly fading away, but we the people can stop it from fading!. Thank you for sharing. It is filled with nice use of rhyme and language. One love
Yes, that's about the size of it Cheryl, and it's happening here to. Sadly the elements are sparing us none.
Great write and heartfelt TY
Blessings
Ch'erie
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
So much truth in these words, dear friend. Another wonderful write from your hands.
I understand the concern about small farms being gobbled up. I do. I understand about a lot of life being used up and rendered unfit. I do understand this but how do you go back? We are evolving to such an extent that soon we will begin to devour each other. I understand this. I didn't used to.
The gifted and fascinating Urban Poet, Asa D Seeley, once again speaks. He introduces a New Genre of Poetry...Reality Confrontation. Juxtaposed with Essay and staying true to his unique style, Asa brings a breath of...fresh air...to the world of poet
Great write and heartfelt TY
Blessings
Ch'erie
~Jackie~
a good write
john+