I kind of missed the story but the feeling comes on quite strong, especially with that ending word. I really like the idea of the mist "crawling across the marsh".
Does that mask have a horny goat for a nose? ;-)
Ron
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2015
Seeking love...nice touch, Jane.
Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2015
This is love. ...love.......lovely. .... :)
Happy halloween Jane :)
Neerja
Ahhh. . . The kicker . . . Love . . . Back to the Marsh are we, Jane, and it's about time. You are putting The Marsh on the map. Love this one very much.
hug
Kathy
Dian
Love & peace be with you
William
KOOL...........
TRASK...
Does that mask have a horny goat for a nose? ;-)
Ron
Always,
Deborah
Happy halloween Jane :)
Neerja