Haunting. Was stillness a sign of quiet(ing) realization - as I hope it is? Or of emptiness - in which case your next poem will be an empty page. In my heart I'm sure it will no and your next will be full, as always.
Charlie
My kind of horror story! Beautifully rhymed into the night with a wronged maiden out to frighten those who wronged her. Cool, like the early morning mist.
This is a a wonderful atmospheric piece Jane,,,I am reminded of Emily Bronte's Kathy in Wutheting Heights...(I live not far from the Bronte's Parsonage in Haworth..)
The atmosphere you have created is fantastic...
I hope there is more of these to come....
Love,
Diana....
Charlie
Ron
I agree with Jerry. Great topic.
There I go again, saying something more.
John
The atmosphere you have created is fantastic...
I hope there is more of these to come....
Love,
Diana....