Each new day is filled with abundant promise & beauty!
Crystal droplets/
like morning dew/
infused with fallen Sun rays/
a refreshing impression/
of sparkling diamond encrusted nectar/
covets the beauty of first fruits/
& opportune moments/
offering up their succulent delights/
an optic oblation/
to the empyrean predawn illuminations/
of promise
Want to review or comment on this poem?
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Reviews of "Promise"
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2012
You help keep my Websters from looking new. Oblation and empyrean. Thanks. I like your line divisions and just the suggestion of "opportune moments/" is Spring-like. ~~ Diana
This book consists of a 150 pages of Christian poetry about the end of time and the Second coming of Jesus Christ not as a servant but as a King, the King of kings. To bring righteousness and peace to the earth and restore the government of God! Peac
Ron