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Our Love Sublime
by Rose L → (All Poetry by Rose L)
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A Collaborative Effort with Rose Limongi & Peter Paton.


 

Our Love so different, from any other kind,

Comes with a notice, forever you are mine.

And if the world objects, it’s of no concern to us,

So lost in sweet attention, and love sublime.



 


Many have observed our love, so precious and so rare

Filled with envy, lust and pain that say it just won’t last

Yet we know the depth of our love bears roots so strong

No storm of emotion could uproot this bond between us



 


The sands of time run swiftly from the glass,

The beauty of our concord is delivered to you and me.

A sparkling mountain river, has never known this emotion before,

Feel the wind of Heaven, coursing softly down on thee.



 


A love that soars above all else, higher still do we climb

No path to difficult to traverse, we conquer them one at a time

Our union melds with nature’s lust, the result a stronger bind

My hand in yours as two pulses become one, soul, heart and mind.


 


The fragrance of new love, musky and intoxicating,

Gentleness and tenderness, encapsulating all.

Hear my heart a new song, that heralds the day,

Paradise is falling, like eiderdown on us.



 


Sublime love, so exalted in it’s splendor

Brings forth a call to heed such affection

For you are the one I truly do adore

With us there resides a perfect connection.


 

Copyright 2004 Rose Limongi & Peter Paton


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 Reviews of "Our Love Sublime"
Reviewed by Masood Lohar
Reviewed on July 7, 2005
"Comes with a notice, forever you are mine"... very well written.. great job
Masood

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2004
..glorious!!!


Vesna :)

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2004
This is absolutely devine...your poetry moulds wings to carry forth the verses into the readers heart...thoroughly enjoyed...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2004
Nicely flowing in both expression and word. Well done to you both

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 29, 2004
Love is all! You've expressed it well once more, Rose. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2004
This is amazing, Rose!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2004
Rose you and Peter seem to have done a good job on this. One problem. My eyes can't read the small print. I probably could were it black print. But I can get enough from it to know that there is stong sentiment in it. I am interested for when I saw "Peter Paton"
mentioned I went to find out who he is. Seems t be a man of mystery.
His poems so far as I can tell are rather esoteric and deep. Thank you Rose for the poem. Maybe you could increase the font size. Let me know and I will go back to it again. Bill

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on May 28, 2004
This is very easy to relate to, and nicely crafted. -- Jeff

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2004
I hope we see more of these, this is lovely.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2004
You both created beauty here..
Love the art........

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on May 27, 2004
clap clap clap....wonderful composition....BHUWAN

Reviewed on May 27, 2004
Must say this shows the talent of two writers to blind their thoughts together in flowing write. Must agree that nothing great than two hands together the pulses becoming one.
Nice write here!!

~~~Tommy &&&***

Reviewed by Judith Pleasant
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
Amazingly perfect and beautiful.
Blessings,
Judith

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
How beautiful! I feel the same way about someone:)

Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
i enjoyed this poem...it left much for me to ponder.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
Good collaboration! Hard to do, I know. I like the melodious thread running through it. Very good.

Carmen :-)


Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
harmonious, you and Peter.

Smiles,
clr

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 25, 2004
A most beautiful collaboration Rose and Peter!
This is very special, wonderfully crafted! Kudo's!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 25, 2004
Beautiful Romantic write Rose!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2004
Beautiful combintion of talents!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2004
Poet Rose Limongi this is such a beautiful romantic write. Wonderful collaboration between you and Poet Peter Paton. Truly takes ones breath away to remember sharing those feelings. If feels right who cares what the rest of the world thinks! Right on! Great picture too! Enjoyed the trip down memory lane. Thank you for sharing this inspirational love feast! Keep The Faith.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 25, 2004
Perfect romance. Enjoyed.


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