Your words weave a complicated story of death, justice, and deep meaning. In every syllable I see an expert trying something new, something that comes so very naturally to her
- - - You are a writer by heart, and by choice. Your acute attention to subtle and obvious detail is beautiful.
Some strong emotions in your "Red for Red". It expresses a point that has gone far beyond mere sadness. There is something cold and final. Your poem elicits much feeling.
A nice work of thought, though the view of revenge is well displayed within this poetic expression of...an eye for an eye...Red for red....the deed is done...
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
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- - - You are a writer by heart, and by choice. Your acute attention to subtle and obvious detail is beautiful.
nice work.....Art Sun...
Regis
Things are never that bad. But you have created an awesome thing of beauty here
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
I hope it's not anyone you know, too many go that route.
:( love
Ch'erie