One United Soul (poem) by Rose L on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 25, 2008

Surely souls meant to be will be united in Love. That is the way life works out. This tells of the waiting and hoping and at what is to be. Hoping Thanks, eventually you will find your soulmate and everyone else in this world will too. Nothing like love to get you by in this world and God's love too. Thamks appreciative of this write.

Reviewed by Masood Lohar

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

This poem is an abstract painting of love and human fragility... helplessnes before the greater schemes or nature... Masood

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on November 13, 2004

Well Ms Rose, I think you already know the answers to the questions posed in this delightful write don't you ?

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on November 11, 2004

This is a very deep write. Not a word wasted here.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

This is really a lovely poem lots of emotion.
You've captured the powers of love. I enjoyed it.
Yes blue eyes do have power. ;)

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle

Reviewed on November 8, 2004

Rose,

Your powerful expression of this yearning is heart-wrenching! You have drawn the reader into all the emotions one feels in a forbidden love! Superb composition!

Cynthia

Thank you Rose for your thoughtful comments on my posting!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on November 8, 2004

Quite simply beautiful and wistful Rose...
Love can be a double edged sword...still if we play the straight game...one is always rewarded...
Great to see your exceptional work on offer again...
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 7, 2004

There is always sadness with forbidden love. Either you make it or you don't. Good expression.

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr

Reviewed on November 7, 2004

Rose,
Again you made me stop and think ( well ponder more than thing ) about this write here. Lots of deep meaning here to me as I took time to read this a few times and let it soak here. One kiss, one night, two passions, and one united soul now that was perfect ending for this write to me. I know I have had this dream before about this but at my age I had tons of dreams,
Again you amaze me with your writes and how they make me think
~~~&&&***
Tommy

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 7, 2004

Most powerful write Rose!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 7, 2004

You have described utter yearning marvelously in this write, Rose.
Quite profound, heartwrenching, and Good.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 7, 2004

a moment of love fills our hearts for eternity ...

heartrending, beautiful poem ...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 7, 2004

Rose this is so powerful, heart wrenching and so well penned.

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on November 7, 2004

This is an exceptional poem Rose. Congratulations!
Chanti

Reviewed by Michael Charles Messineo

Reviewed on November 7, 2004

ROse, your insight is incredible.

...Michael

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

Rose, this piece has the effect of a double edge sworn slicing through one�s soul, my friend. First and foremost, it tears at the very fabric, which makes up one�s life, and the dreadful loneliness that one could feel by making the wrong selection in a partner or lover chosen. Secondly, by admitting to this mistake, one could then easily become embroiled in a secret relationship, which could then easily turn into a disaster for the unknowing partner, and/or their offspring, if in fact any were created during the relationship. However, if no children were involved, then for this scenario to play out would be truly divine, and hopefully the one left out would understand, that if you love someone and you cannot please them, it�s better to set them free to explore their life. After all life is too short to live in misery. Excellent work, my precious friend. I am glad you�re doing well, considering everything you�ve gone through down there in the �Sunshine State� these past few months! I enjoyed the read, and I am so happy to see you are able to post again. Thanks for sharing your work. Take good care and be well.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

Sounds like the lack of computer from the hurricanes have sparked your muse one hundred fold...keep em' coming...Peace, Ed & rufuz