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2,6,4 Day
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2,6,4 Day

 

Sometimes a day feels OK

Sometimes my directions lead me the wrong way

I’ve got feelings inside

Feelings I just can’t hide

I’ve got a dream to pursue now

But I just don’t know how

 

I know what I want

And I reach out to grab it

It’s not that easy

But I’m going to have it

I won’t give up on my dream

Just ‘cos it’s my own scheme

 

Vacant faces, empty spaces

That’s the difference between you and me

You with your own life

Me with mine

That’s why we’ll never be

It’s not that I don’t like you

‘Cos I don’t

It’s not that I can’t

It’s because I won’t

 

And it’s been a 2,6,4 day

Everything goes its own special way

But I’m stuck on a platform

Watching the trains go thundering past

I scream but all sound is lost

And a train stops at last

 

© Andrea  Coltman

 

 

 

Apologies for my absence…been back to hospital; my second home!!! Will catch up ASAP

 

 


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 Reviews of "2,6,4 Day"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
Well done, Andrea. My best wishes to you to get well. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Andrea,

So glad you're back - haven't lost your masterful poetic touch ... shear excellence ...

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on January 31, 2005
wish and hope for better
for you
this poem rang true for alot here i'm sure
we all been to this place before
and you got the feelings down packed!!!
enjoyed
you take care

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 30, 2005
Awwww well written hope you will be okay my friend!!

God Bless!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2005
Very insightful write.

Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2005
I can so relate to this emotional piece of vacancy. Out standing expressions you have pened.:)
Nila

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2005
If you gotta dream you gotta go for it.

Sorry to hear about hospital. Don't appologise. Just get and stay well.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 29, 2005
A heartfelt poem, Andrea, and very glad to hear that you're out of the hospital. Hope you're feeling a lot better soon. And I do love that picture.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 29, 2005
What a great poem, have missed you!
Andrea, I hope you are well soon?

love,eileen

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2005
Sorry to hear you have been in the hospital but glad you are back.


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