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TLC
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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TLC


Hers was a life laid down
to care for the needs of men
in a decrepit hospital ward.

She knew the scent of sleepless nights,
the onslaught of the relentless days
and she blotted out their pain.

Sweat-soaked skin
that no amount of soap
could freshen;
the ammonia of fever
and the subtle musk of death:
all were familiar to her -
even the taint of fruitless semen...

But suddenly, there was
an unfamiliar fragrance:
a body that was different,
outside of her jurisdiction,
not under her most tender care...

He said she nursed him
back to life,
that he lived to take care of her
always.

When he said his name was Jesus,
she was suddenly in a garden;
Love was calling her name:
"Mary".

Only his hands could make her well.
 

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 Reviews of "TLC"
Reviewed by Cynthia Castle
Reviewed on March 28, 2005
Kate,

Stunning! Very powerful write. Thank you for sharing this tremendous uplifting treasure.

Cynthia

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
Such a revealing of truth verse by verse here, Kate!! Jesus saw Mary's heart, not the externals. He was criticized for fraternizing with undesirables. It is life's irony that those brought down are usually the ones closest to God. This unfolding makes Jesus known as human, as He was or He couldn't have fulfilled His destiny as a human sacrifice. I hope not to offend, but Jesus was not the effeminate image that is portrayed in general. He was a carpenter, muscled and swarthy. His contenance would not have been looked on as fair, by any means of the word...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
This is an amazing tribute to a woman. With the doubts the Di Vinci Code put into history you seem to give us a more human touch to rely upon. Thank you a million times for words so beautiful and compassionate that love means more to me.

Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
Very up lifting write to read on this sunny Easter Morning and so approp. Hope you and yours have a wondereful holiday. Felix

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
Such a promise, a love so strong, the hands ready, the body willing.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 26, 2005
on through the strength of healing can that which was healed, heal which was healing it ...

unique and powerfully rendered ... excellent metaphor that blends into the season ...

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2005

"Only his hands could make her well"

The ending kinda broke my legs off... totally unexpected... gorgeous in its impact. Sublime altogether.

Beautiful Kate.

~Mari


Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 26, 2005
An inspiring write that is a testimony to your faith, Kate. Thank you for sharing this timely offering. Love and peace to you and Happy Easter. Regis

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on March 26, 2005
This is beautiful... His companionship is always close...

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on March 26, 2005
oh yes!
The spirit of Jesus was in all the patients
As in All mankind!
yes!!!
oh
I wish you could see my face......I just lit up when I got to the ending!!!
wonderful

At first my thoughts were darkly comic and secular
I was thinking.......The World According To Garp

Ever see that movie

About a nurse who is not.........an opportunist.....in a way.

If you have not seen the movie, write me and I will tell you about it....to write that here seems like a blasphamy......

aye aye

ok I hope my ramble did not detract from my sincere delight of this write Kate

Happy Holiday Dear Lady

pax Anita :)

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on March 26, 2005
This is outstanding, Kate. You leave me nearly speachless. This goes into my library. Happy Easter to you and your family.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2005
Another keeper. I've read read and reread this.
How perfect can a poem get.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 26, 2005
You have penned a gem.

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on March 26, 2005
Man is this ever good, Kate. Powerful write.

Reviewed on March 26, 2005
O, Kate,

Vivid olfactory imagery brings the hospital smells of sickness and decay powerfully into mind; and to come into the Presence of the High Physician Himself--most inspiring and faith building!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)


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