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Today's Magic
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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Burstin with prose this evening...


TODAY’S MAGIC


I walked briskly the length of the university campus to catch the last post. Across quads of concrete, my image was mirrored in verticals of grubby sheet glass and unyielding uprights of steel as I bent against an easterly wind.

The students all home, emptiness rang out - and hardness: academic pressure, cancer, radiotherapy, ulcerative colitis and degenerative disease – culminating in death. The heavy load of recent months.

But instead of straight lines all I could see was fluidity. My reflection a willow counterbalanced against force; my gait, like my breathing, strong and pumping. My outline softer, more compliant – with my lengthening hair and weight-loss. Hard edges eroding.

Over the concourse, the postman noticed my smile and purposeful approach. He walked to meet me halfway, his hand outstretched as if with benevolence. We exchanged inconsequential words, communication that was easy and flowing, as my letter changed hands.

Turning back, I watched a child on her bike wheeling in elaborate, exaggerated circles, enjoying unhindered paved space and leaning into the dynamics of her life, bubbles of laughter catching on the wind and bouncing off tall buildings.

Life on wheels - the picture fixed in my mind today: frail humanity borne forwards into new spheres of existence. Changing, moving out, growing up and shifting into new cycles.

I hung a left and walked in the lee of the wind through expansive landscaped grounds. Fresh green grass rippled mildly, applauding the exuberant showiness of fountains who threw back their heads with ringing laughter in response. A workman’s radio billowed rasping strains of Sting’s: “Every little thing she does is magic…”

Ah, yes: The Magic! The energy that sets the wheels in motion, transforming harsh places of steel and stone into mystical centres of journey and growth.


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 Reviews of "Today's Magic"
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on April 13, 2006
Well done, Kate. Good description and flow to final point.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 13, 2006
Most outstanding prose!!

Enjoyed the Vidid imagery you painted!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on April 13, 2006
I loved reading this, Kate. It gave me a glimpse of you in your daily life. I enjoy your expression of how you see things.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 13, 2006
Changing, moving out, growing up and shifting into new cycles.

And may your new cycles be glorious ones for you, Kate.

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on April 13, 2006
Outstanding proseful piece Kate, the imagery conjoured here is pure magic, although the campus sounds a bit grim lol...I went to a rather beautiful college, lots of green and views etc...(never got much work done, too busy looking out of windows during lectures lol). This is pure excellence Kate, go to the top of the class.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 12, 2006
The one thing about living that God gited to us is our ability to dream. This gives us hope and a vacation on the frugal side. I love the steps you took today and your abilty to word it so we all rode upon your shoulder.
thanks for a beautiful picture.
Susan

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 12, 2006
wow, Kate ... this is really impressive! i am in awe of its fluidity and perspective ... ( wish i wrote it ;)

Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2006
Looking out through your eyes, the imagery distinct - enjoyed this very much - thanks for your generous comment today.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on April 12, 2006
Kate - You take us on yout magic carpet through the form and structure of an ordinary institution of learning,with your words turning it into a wonderland of beauty and purpose... and a touch of young ones to take it to the next level. You share a pen of magical movement to a score of unwsritten music within our heads. Marvelous! And, thank you . - Bill

Reviewed on April 12, 2006
Kate,

Whatever you write is pure magic to me. Excellent imagery, very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Prayers still in the offing for you; daddy doing better (FINALLY). Now in nursing home for rehab/therapy. Pray like crazy that he comes home soon and that he gets renewed strength! Thanks! :)

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on April 12, 2006
Kate
This is a mystical and enchanting write that takes the reader on a metaphysical magic carpet ride through the deep canyons of the mind !
I sense you are being rejuvenated in spirit, and your will and purpose are developing new and unplumbed depths of strength and resistance to cope with the frailities and uncertainties of life !
You have enormous fighting spirit and resolve which will stand you in good stead for your expansive and opening fresh horizons !
Blessings
Peter

Reviewed on April 12, 2006
We absolutely agree with Felix and Karla in every point. A magical beautiful write!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed on April 12, 2006
Kate,

And every little thing YOU do is magic. :) A most beautiful, engaging, inspiring write. Thank you!

(((((HUGS))))), love and many continued prayers, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 12, 2006
Yes remember the song and I think he must have had my sweet Kate in his mind when he wrote that song. I can see you in my minds eye taking your walk as your poet's eye transforms sight into words of beauty and hope. I am glad you are back and in good form dear one.

{Pops


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