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The Touching of my Heart
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The touching of my heart

 

Many have touched my life

Some gentle, some unkind.

Some of them brought great strife

Some also touched my mind.

My parents were the first to care

Brother and sisters too.

They touched me and love did share,

But there was sadness too.

To a schoolmaster I must give a nod

A special interest he did take

He guided me on new paths to trod

My destiny he did shape.

There were childhood friends,

Grown up ones too

There were sweetheart friends

Some I thought were true .

The love I sought so hard to find

For me was not to be

Life I found can be so unkind

Children the only legacy

My children came into my life

What a wonder to behold

As I gazed upon each new-born life

Each more precious than gold.

What a joy it was to love them

And protect them from all fears

To hug them and care for them

And wipe away their tears.

And then into my life you came

And love was found at last

This would not be the same

As anything in the past.

This love has stood the test of time

Through good times and through bad

I thank you for those good times

I also thank you for the bad.

We need bad times to show we care

Enough to stick around

That in the good we are more aware

Of the love that we have found.

I thank you for your kindness

And the good times we have shared

No need to show love’s blindness

We know true love is shared.

I thank you for those little talks

In which we both delight

I thank you for the twilight walks

As the moon shines down so bright.

I thank you for the knowledge too

That we will never part,

But most of all I thank you

For the touching of my heart.

 

P.J. McCormick

Copyright Mar 16th 2005
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 Reviews of "The Touching of my Heart"
Reviewed by Clarence Prince
Reviewed on June 20, 2011
"The Touching Of My Heart" Surely, this poem must have touched many readers' hearts, souls and minds, Patrick. It's lovely!

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on March 18, 2009
A GREAT poetic taspestry of your kind heart.
May you always be as you are today.
Amen!

JMD

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
Good tale of love and love that lasts and lasts until eternity. I had it too but he left Aug 17 07 to go with the angels in heaven and his Lord and Savior. He is in my spirit now too and I will love him always, He was so touching a person to me and sounds like you treat yours as he treated me. Nothing can keep love from growing, but death. Yours is still growing, I am sure.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Written with a classic style and deep sincerity. Beautiful flow and meaning. Love the ending! Bravo~
Sheila

Reviewed by David Clure
Reviewed on March 5, 2008
Patrick,

You have done something in poem I think we all should do. Remember that everyone of us has been influenced for good or evil by others along the way. This is a great expression of acknowledging that no one is an island unto themselves. Good work! May your readership increase, as you touch others.

-Zach

Reviewed by Barbara Mercer
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
Beautiful poem, written with a true heart. An Irish gift for language.
Barbara, a fellow Torontonian whose mother was born in Belfast.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 19, 2007
Such a beautiful write! Holly

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
beautiful and tender-glad i stopped by

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
Sweet and wise and sincere. Thank Y O U !! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on November 6, 2006
A very stirring write, Patrick - you have, indeed, been blessed!
And so was I, reading it.
Rhonda

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on November 3, 2006
Wonderful write! A great journey called life and to know love is to be a part of it! It's so obvious you've been Blessed!
Love and Peace ~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2006
So very smooth, elegant and loving dear Patrick!!!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 30, 2006
An out standing write Pat
enjoyed

Peace Be with You
William

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2006
Dear Mr. McCormick, I was deeply moved by this outstanding piece you have penned here. I can relate every line so well to my own life and, like you, feel so grateful to those who have touched my life from childhood to the present. I especially loved the feelings you convey about your children and when, at last, you found that special person who made your life complete. I truly enjoyed every moment of this.
~Butch

Reviewed by Jerelyn Craden
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
Sweet, romantic, spiritual, inspiring. I just loved this, Patrick.
Jerelyn

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2006
Perfection!
Blessed be ..Twin Souls reconnected!



Vesna:)

Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2005
Patrick - this is beautiful and I agree - it should be set to beautiful music. It just flows so beautifully.

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on May 7, 2005
Fine write! Patrick, this reads like a song--I can practically hear the music. It's a fine thing to be grateful for God's gifts, and the pain that you've felt makes them all the more precious...

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
Reviewed on April 19, 2005
Great write and original format...

Reviewed on March 29, 2005
Patrick,

Grand style; layout; verse; meaning - beautiful, simply beautiful!!


Best regards,

Robert

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on March 21, 2005
beautiful touching write
showing a waonderful heart here
becareful and take care of it

Reviewed on March 18, 2005
beautiful and heart touching write, pat; very nicely presented! bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

happy belated st. patrick's day to ye, friend! :) hope it was happy!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 17, 2005
A superb tribute to the true love between two people that can reach so many others in life. Thank you for sharing this beauty, Patrick. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 17, 2005
A truly marvelous and extremely heartfelt poetic thank you ode to your soulmate, Patrick.

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on March 16, 2005
Experiences are layered like the grand canyons of our lives. When the sun finally sets on it all, the view cannot be put into words.

blessin's on a very nice write, (again)
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2005
Pat,
This is the most wonderful and true heartfelt poem of Love. I'll bet you you got nothing but streaming tears and hugs when she received this. Such wonderful and warming words to ever speak to those you truly love so often left unsaid.
Perfect and so truly Beautiful.
Tracey
Brought tears to my eyes.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2005
I find myself echoing your sentiments and this is why I wrote what I did for all of us here.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 16, 2005
nicely done


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