Another "survivor" who felt your pain deep to the bone.
Keep remembering that you are a highly gifted poet, who
is treasured by many here at The Den, not the least of
which is me.
Hey, I know just how to make sure you get a good nights sleep....
WELL HONEY now we're quits. I post a serious piece, you comment on the paragraph about my tattoo. You post a serious piece, I start flirting.
Seriously this is an excellent, horrific thought provoking poem Jan and I like it just as much as I did first time around.
love,
me
Janet, I've read this several times, and the pain even in reading is beyond the imagination of most.
For a child to be forced to live within this nightmare, is a horrid nasty thought.
Your words sting, but should clear the path for all to understand.
Lisa
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
I agree with Deborah. Who can control what happens to children or anyone though. So happy you survived Janet.......
I am stunned by the power and clout of this awesome poetry.
Wow Janet,this poem is disturbing,sad,and to the heart,from the heart.
Best wishes to you always
from
your Australian fan (and an admirer of your strength)
Kay.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
J.C., Jesus Jumping, Mother Mary, Dear Lord Above!!! Ill never be able to sleep right again!!! Absolutely just ripped a gigantic hole right through my soul!!! No one should ever have to endure anything like this!!! My God!!! I am totally speechless, Poet!!! WHEW!!!
Pain expressed is pain positively used. Writing poetry is incredibly cathartic. I said this not for your benefit Janet but for TASK (Sorry mate but your review wasn't the ticket).
Janet, your poem is incredibly well written although horrific in content. It literally sent shivers through me. I will be reading more from your mighty pen.
Chanti
In June, 2000, two college students Amy Shute and Jason Burgeson were approached by a group of men. Forced into the backseat and driven to a remote location, they were murdered in cold blood.
Following this brutal double homicide, Johnston, RI D
Keep remembering that you are a highly gifted poet, who
is treasured by many here at The Den, not the least of
which is me.
Hugs to you,
Tami
leaves one with a certain disdain for 'humanity' ... an adept and powerful write!
WELL HONEY now we're quits. I post a serious piece, you comment on the paragraph about my tattoo. You post a serious piece, I start flirting.
Seriously this is an excellent, horrific thought provoking poem Jan and I like it just as much as I did first time around.
love,
me
subject with dignity and skill , God Bless you !!!
Peter Paton
This is just to painful to penned down a honest review!!
Hugs And Love to You dear Girlfriend!!
Love Tinka
For a child to be forced to live within this nightmare, is a horrid nasty thought.
Your words sting, but should clear the path for all to understand.
Lisa
Wow Janet,this poem is disturbing,sad,and to the heart,from the heart.
Best wishes to you always
from
your Australian fan (and an admirer of your strength)
Kay.
Janet, your poem is incredibly well written although horrific in content. It literally sent shivers through me. I will be reading more from your mighty pen.
Chanti
xoxox LP
I WILL ONLY HAVE BEAUTIFUL PSYCHIC DREAMS AS I SLEEP IN PEACE!
DO Not Keep Looking Back It will Only Destroy You Of His Your(OWN) Free Will!!
Your Friend,TRASK