I tried to catch a falling raindrop. Instead a
black bird landed on my tongue.
I knew that he was bad luck.
Stammering, his voice was changing,
when he asked me to come along.
Where, is it that you wish to take me?
I inquired uncomfortably. His response:
Just over to the green meadow near the trees
Replying Ah, the meadow, yes, yes,
Id like to go, with the rain subsiding
he flew off my tongue.
Trying to keep up was tricky. Soon
he became a black dot in a vast sky.
Follow, I must. Something beckoned and
Curiosity is my name.
Arriving was sweet
Butterflies and fairies,
were dancing through the trees. The
scent of flowers wafted universally.
There were toads on lily pads lazily
adrift. Ribbit, ribbit, ribbit
was their croaking,
a sacred lullaby.
Approaching my view was a tiny man:
a crooked three cornered hat, atop his head,
brown knee length pants,
vest snug at his waist, pointy shoes and
decorative digits covered in gems.
He clutched a bag with an emerald drawstring.
Treasures and pleasures were sure to be within.
He asked Surely you know whats inside?
I couldnt help but notice how his sparkles
blinded and lured at the same time.
Of course I do, lets unwrap your goodie-bag.
Fingers shaking, animation domination
and a
feeling of dread.
I pulled the cord; the container fell, revealing all.
I glanced at the man and saw the sneer on
his distorted face. Fixed canary eyes looked
at me, as the goblins flew passed my face.
I hadnt noticed the pointed teeth,
due to his blinding light. Or the
smell of sulphur that reeked from every pore.
The black bird had cleverly placed
A spell on my senses,
the day that he landed on
My tongue.
If ever a black bird
invites you to a land of greenery,
run, reject, refuse him.
Send him back from whence he came.
To lands unknown, dryness,
darkness, the abyss or
Ill meet you there,
among the deceived.
Sept. 10, 2002
©2002 Janet Caldwell
really enjoyed reading this. =)
Slowly brought me into the kingdom of the nature spirits!
Loved this!
Sorry for not responding much lately but I had my PC fixed from viruses and I am back now. This was a very intriguing write. I loved the idea and the novel approach. Great job! Quote the raven evermore! Stick with bluebirds, I don't trust the black ones!lol!
Beautiful. Gregg
Many smiles,
Janice
PS- by the way, Have you ever KNOWN a bird? Angels. Was the abuser pretending to be a bird? Promising flight?
How Deep Is Well Sold,
How Deep Is Satan's Told,
Is Nothing Compared To As TRASK Un-Folds...
Thanks, TRASK
hugs (PS Let me know how your tests comes along. You're in my prayers)
Victoria
YUP!!! So, so, true!!! I love this!!!
Know the feeling, and it is one that haunts! Run, and run fast!
Awesome Write!
Hugs and Love,
Maria
P.S. Thanks for your comments on my last poem. I am glad you liked it! Oh, I have a poem called "Gist Of Cognizance" I can't remember if you read it or not, but if you haven't, stop by and read it, this poem reminded me of it!
Some of your works are outstanding. Never stop your writing. I gracefully cheer you on. Patrick (a fellow Texan) Hugs to you and yours.
Now to bake a black bird pie. :7
Gina
brown knee length pants........vest snug at his waist, pointy shoes and..... Yeah, sounds like me. Well what treasures and pleaseures can I offer you sweets? Three guesses OK.
You should get your amphibracuses and Amphimacers out and play with them more often.
(OK that's got everybody mystified now)
lotsalove babes,
Ian.
deceitful birds anyway?
Only you can write this
excellent way Janet.
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Love you, JO JO
Jack