Disarray (poem) by Janet P Caldwell on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 16, 2003

Absolutely visual! -- I can definitely relate!
"... and unkempt places" ...
And in the shape of flower vases;
In our eyes and in the traces
of our tears as thought replaces
all our fears with words; embraces
all our years with verse to grace us
with the memories of things too
precious to forget.

Reviewed by Cindy Burch (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Perfect absolutley perfect.

Reviewed by Pat Mullan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Dear Janet,

Just read 'Disarray' and then read it again - and then again. There's so much there - or perhaps I find so much there... and every writer wants to reach each reader's emotional fibre. You have certainly done that.

Congratulations!
Best wishes,
Pat.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Good to see your name in the spotlight, Jan...Congratulations!
I liked this one a lot.

Gina

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Very well done, Janet. Thank you for the kind words on my work. Congratulations are in order for your winning the contest. :)
Amor

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2003

I enjoyed this poem, Janet!

And congratulations on winning the Third AD poetry competition!

Thanks,

Richard Vallance

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2003

An amazing slice of life Janet�..fantastic poem�Congratulations on winning the comp�You truly deserve it.

My best, Dani xox

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on October 8, 2003

Ah, tis such disarray that oftentimes create the best writes... Well done!

Tami

Reviewed by Lloydene Hill

Reviewed on October 6, 2003

Sounds like a day in my life, except the ashes part, but then perhaps we all have something that is left empty and ashy in our lives. Again, you have proven your metal!

Reviewed by Micha Julian

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

yes, yes, yes...
and how I wish some lost, lol, could be found...
your style, honest, true to many, just excellent, love your work!
Thank You..
m.

wish anything would come, at this point, sooo...this, ah, from the disarray, wow, you give us Poetry!
YES!
LOVE IT
LOVE IT
m.

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on September 28, 2003

I really like this creative poem. It is very well written! God Bless! Shy

Reviewed by D. Enise

Reviewed on September 28, 2003

(((((((( Janet!! ))))))) I simply LOVE this!!
It's as though you have been to "my" home! Felt like I was reading my own life! Excellent Write!! (as always! *S*)
I have missed being here! And have missed you and your work! As well as other friends here. Hopefully my dark year has come to an end! *S*
*HUGS*
~Jen

Reviewed by Sara Russell

Reviewed on September 28, 2003

This was fun for me to read... not least because I am not exactly tidy myself! Our CDs are always in the wrong covers too. And when a poem strikes that "yes, I've been there" note, it moves more people and makes them smile.

Sara.

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on September 27, 2003

You messy girl, I will just have to take you in hand and get you organised.
Missed you love.
Ian
By the way, the poem is excellent

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

Excellant work Janet, and tho I am sure most of us be in a state of disarray aka messatude it is one of those brushed aside insignificant things that seems to keep us otherwise in array!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

I like your messy write.

Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman

Reviewed on September 25, 2003

Very good, subjective enough to keep appeal, the last stanza is a strong finish.

Reviewed by jing javier

Reviewed on September 25, 2003

well written.

miss you mom.

lovelots,

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 25, 2003

(((janet)))

o, i've missed you--i love this write *applause*

my apartment is a MESS--and so is my head LOL

thank God for writing! :)

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

you've written a keeper for my library! :)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on September 25, 2003

nice write, janet; glad to see you back again! gurl, where have you BEEN??? we've missed you here at the den! (((HUGS))) and much love, your fellow friend in texas, karen lyn. :D

Reviewed by anne cunningham

Reviewed on September 25, 2003

so true, so true.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 25, 2003

Its amazing where poems turn up :-) Great write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 25, 2003

Very well done Janet!!

Glad you back!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 25, 2003

as long as they are born ;)

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)