In The Rain (poem) by Shezray Faisal on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 7, 2002

I'm just a sucker for a good rain poem. I get the feeling from this that you have danced in more than a few rainpours. Very soothing.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on August 7, 2002

WOW! That is all I can say! WOW! Bill Hugs

Reviewed by Alain Gracio

Reviewed on July 14, 2002

I love your writing style and the way you express yourself.
Cheers
Allain

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 2, 2002

absolutely lovely imagery, and great usage of words.

Reviewed by Muhammad Ali Panhwar (Reader)

Reviewed on July 1, 2002

Ahhh "And that’s when I knew that
I had looked in the eyes of God" wonderful.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on July 1, 2002

well done........ ;0)

Reviewed by Mustafa Chughtai (Reader)

Reviewed on June 24, 2002

i think nobody couldve commented better than Ghuffran. really imaginative, takes u right there where uve been n makes one want to think how easliy u got ure thoughts such a wonderful image ..well done ..like always ...it was fantabulous !!!

Reviewed by Mehboob Panhwar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2002

Exellent attempt!! Very nicely written.

Reviewed by Saira Samee

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

Superb rendition of human soul expression...u are so aligned with your spirit... hold on to it always

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

A great reminder of beauty that's all around us.

Reviewed by farrahnaz peerzada (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

a beautiful rendition of what we all wish we cud get a glimpse of..ur gifted...its beautiful!

Reviewed by GHUFFRAN AMAN ULLAH

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

well if i say it again i'll be repeating what everybody said...but envy the rain i envy the reason you were in the rain in the first place....what lucky girl....find me a reason to look into the eyes of God also....but lovely my dear....i am sure at that moment God smiled upon the earth because you smiled of sheer happiness at him...

Reviewed by Jack Hike

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

So Beautiful and The rhyme part is amazing! I envy the rain! :)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

nature is very revealing...

Reviewed by Matthew Wright (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

Excellent writing; you brought it to life.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

Very nice.