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Surrender, a naked Colonel
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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When the uniform is not there to remind of past battles, when petticoats are shed so love can wear bare skin, then, and only then...surrender can be it...


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The breeze was caressing the naked Colonel
that was lying down on the summer night,
by the wet cool grass like a carpet by the river,
the only one whispering was that moonlight,
telling about two lovers waiting so very long
and that they never should have been apart.

Her finger followed from his left shoulder
down to his belly button the deepest scar
a man can get from a cavalry sword without
giving for it, his soul to God, and his life;
tenderly she kissed every inch of the wound,
knowing about pain, she didn’t need to ask.

His hand went to the back of her slim neck,
tenderly pulling her over until two were one,
feeling the weight of her body, the soft skin
and the fragrance that only a woman can have,
because no flower will ever smell so sweet,
as a feminine, beautiful Southern Belle, can.

Lips searching for lips, desperation, needs,
fear of another departure, absence does that,
bend the souls and cover them with the ashes
left by the passion of many a unforgettable fire,
embracing each other with excruciating promise,
then, leaving this world to enter a different one.

He never felt so protected despite being naked,
the warm of her soft body from a blushing bride,
covering her lover with all of her long wanting,
a Cicerone she, guiding him to be deep inside,
where no one was allowed there, her secret place,
no words to open that door were necessary.

She had him at last, no sword, uniform or war,
the wounds would be sealed, love will confide,
he will be naked and forever under her skin,
she will carry him as if he were a second heart,
because in the shores of that river, the Colonel
whispered to her, I love you, with tearful eyes.




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 Reviews of "Surrender, a naked Colonel"
Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on May 30, 2008
...with much beauty you paint a union...with passion...where two souls bare...everything.
excellent Georg...
John

Reviewed on May 29, 2008
He never felt so protected despite being naked ... this line shines like a moon of love on the ocean of hope.

Deeply touchig and exceptionally romantic poem. Thanks dear George for this great offering

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on May 28, 2008
Very beautiful and soooooo romantic
Each word and stanza was sensual
And so much passion
Truly an unforgettable sweet and tender Surrender!
Georg this one reminded me of a romance novel
Brilliant love poem!!
Peace love and light...and hugessss too...Morning star

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 28, 2008
Oh my! What a moving, sensual, and passionate write my friend. Written with tenderness, thought, passion and emotions. Powerful imagery that allows the reader to invision the reuniting of two that share more than love, but a bond of eternity! Well done my dear friend, a captivating write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 28, 2008
Bravo Georg, as I just stated in La Belle's review box, her poems of past trysts and love affairs transport us back in time, you also seem to have the key to that time travel system and thank you indeed for shifting us into the picture from time to time.
fee

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2008
Oh my,beautiful writing dear man,have a wonderful and safe day OK...Hugss

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 28, 2008
Beautifully written throughout, Georg. But that last stanza
made it all worthwhile: she will carry him as if he were a
second heart. - Gene.

Reviewed on May 28, 2008
Geoerge You Are The Romantic Poet Of Love!
This is a very loving write & I especially loved how you spoke of the power of love. This Poem is Deep Hearts of Purity's Passion!!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed on May 27, 2008
How could you ever put that uniform back on after this, you're naked, you're in paradise, why come back? Very Beautiful!
Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 27, 2008
In shedding what is earthly to build on the creativity that lies protected withing one's soul and to give it willingly to another is heavenly splendor at its finest....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 27, 2008
Exquisite, Romantic, Gorgeous, Breathtaking,,,,,you took my breath away.
Christine

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on May 27, 2008
What a beautiful Poem. Two have become one.

Reviewed on May 27, 2008
Most beautiful offering, Georg; very nice! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed on May 27, 2008
Oh, this is beautifully poignant, Georg - very well penned -

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed on May 27, 2008
A sensuous poem, yes; but also a tender poem of great love that you have expressed with open heart. You've excelled in this romantic surrender, dear Georg...
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on May 27, 2008
She heard his profession
only to seal his confession
of never to leave her again for war
and be by her side forever more.

His promise sealed with an ardent kiss
and her fate was no longer a miss.
She was happy to be with this man
and under his loving command.

Never shall he falter or fail
and always will he keep her this frail,
to his deepest and darkest awful pain
that should alway deeply remain.

One day in the far reaches of time
this woman and this man will form quite a trine
of lovers and souls that continue to meet
ages and ages of circles complete.

Well Georg, I guess my muse needed to say something to you about your poem.... wow, It's uncontrollable...can't help it..lol
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 27, 2008
A poem full of loves passion and desire.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on May 27, 2008
Erotic and romantic, I love the passion in your lines. There is steam comming off my screen, this is HOT and also tender.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 27, 2008
VERY ROMANTIC AND SWEET, BEAUTIFUL POEM, FULL OF LOVE!!!!!!!! 'She will carry him as if he were a second heart, because in the shores of that river, the Colonel whispered to her, I love you, with tearful eyes'--------MOST BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 27, 2008
Wow Georg you make every woman envy for her men to be so inviting. A beautiful write as you take us away to the shore with you. Better watch it or you could end up with a few naked ladies meeting up with you. Thanks for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 27, 2008
One of the most tender, yet sensual exciting love poems, I have ever read! your depth of feeling is awesome Gorg!...ET

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 27, 2008
Wow! The Naked Colonel. Quite a sizzling love story, brother; but I better not include this one in the Ancient Book of Eds; it's a 'G' rated book.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on May 27, 2008
My or my Georg, what a beautiful romantic poem. I knew you had it in you. Terrific write, I'm still blushing. Yes Georg, I blush. Love, Bonnie


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