Cold obliviousness has taken hold of our forest making the bird go mute and the wind to come with a white shroud to cover the dead illusions so nobody can see their empty indignity.
Music
The window was open and the soft voice
of a piano went releasing among the trees
dreams not yet awakened by morning with
the enchanting tunes of it’s tender melody,
an early bird perched high was listening
forced by the piano enchantment to sing,
a-cappella chorus in the very background
with the murmur of dried autumn leaves,
as I walked through the thoughts penumbra
hoping she will come having a light for me.
Went more and more far way into the forest,
the music transformed in a whispering beam
followed, until deaf thorn bushes with claws
shredded every tone alive with angry jealousy
leaving only the unwelcoming void of silence
disturbed only by dry leaves under my feet;
and as I reached our white stone by the lake
that you were not there…I sadly could see,
had illusions, expectations, warm lonely arms,
and my heart kind of stopped its happy beat.
Time has come and gone, the lake frozen,
winter couldn’t wait anymore, it just did,
pushing the rest of rusting days of autumn
covering our white stone with its melancholy
as you never arrived to our most secret place
where you and me together should have been
with your red head leaning on my shoulder
and your lips just brushing by my cold lips
to give that affectionate lover’s welcome
that’s so worthy of expecting eons for it.
Returning everyday, that window is closed,
the piano is now mute and music absentee,
leading path to our stone devoured by snow
the gray skies like a shroud over all of me
as I deplorably ask, “where are you my love?”
now that even the little birds stopped to sing
and the forest shadows make the light so dimly
that the contours of your beautiful face can’t lit;
where are you my love? I have become blind and
even if you were here, you my love, couldn’t see.
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Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2008
Beautiful writing sweet man..stay safe and well...Hugsss
Such BEAUTY Georg! as it moves my heart strongly!
A treasured keeper!
HER spirits knows YOURs CLEARLY! The song brings me to tears...
YOur expression are deep and intense!
YOu my loving friend, need a nice long massage! I'm ready if you are...
How is our Collab coming along... any ideas...
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExoooo
Good Morning Georg,
Wonderfully Expressed Poem of Love Aching...
the deafness of love succumbs by the blindness of love...
no-one ever sees real clearly, but the heartache certainly is perfectly clear
Much Love & Inspiration To You Always
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
So beautifully worded and expressed, words that impale the heart with sadness! Come take a bubblebath with me and we will forget the worries of the day! HUGS! SC
Georg, this is touched me..I love your words of loneliness and despair and your descriptive stanzas about the change of the seasons.
Everything about this poem is wonderful.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
I have enjoyed the reading of "Where are you...my love?". Very touching voice singing to inspire and strike the hearts.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
A treasured keeper!
HER spirits knows YOURs CLEARLY! The song brings me to tears...
YOur expression are deep and intense!
YOu my loving friend, need a nice long massage! I'm ready if you are...
How is our Collab coming along... any ideas...
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExoooo
STay Positive!
Wonderfully Expressed Poem of Love Aching...
the deafness of love succumbs by the blindness of love...
no-one ever sees real clearly, but the heartache certainly is perfectly clear
Much Love & Inspiration To You Always
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Be always safe,
Karen
Newfie hugs, Rose
most excellent Georg...
John
"dreams not yet awakened by morning"
BRAVO for "Where are you...my love?? it's magnificant.
Blessings,
Marcia
ET
Everything about this poem is wonderful.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(
Well done,
Fee
But you are becoming quite masterful in matching music with pen, brother.
Awwww, Georg, I always knew you cared...I am right here...;) Ed
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.