I dropped the anchor in a secluded arm of Lake Moultrie, the astern
just level to a deserted docking close for the season, not far away
from the road, the rings on the calm, glass like water tiptoing towards to
the opposite shore like rainbows on a reflected sky on the lake’s face.
I had told her that I would be arriving that afternoon, that I didn’t expected
her to make the trip, even if it was a short one, but that if a goodbye was
to be said, my ears to hear it and my heart to get empty then and there.
Time was running away from us, like the last sand corns of the hourglass
which no one of us wished to see telling us that our time was up.
I don’t know how long I stood in the middle of the salon, but I heard the
soft and vacillating steps on the thick carpet, turned around, she was there.
“You came” I whispered, “You came”
“Yes” she said, “ tell me how I couldn’t?”
suddenly to put my trust on my voice
I stopped, words had left me, I was mute,
blurred, my eyes that could see the stars,
to discern the lovely face where blind,
my quivering fingers found her chin
and gentle very gentle forced the face up
her lips parted just a warmth whisper
and I kissed them with a tenderness
that I never did know inside me I had,
how long it was? A few seconds kiss,
or years between our lips kept passing by;
a burning yearning brought the tears
as I embraced her with so aching arms,
like the branches of an old oak tree,
which were so empty for so long a time,
“You came” kept whispering “You came”
as my heart was listening to her heart.
OMG Georg..Such tender words
You have captured such beautiful vividness and
the long awaited second where lips met
Wow this kind of romance can melt a woman's heart!!
Brilliant Romantic write!!
Now I can read the next one
Peace Love and Light...Morning Star
George This Is Captivating Poetry
Very Endearing Passions Embrace The Pages Of Your Den With This Lovely Poem....Warmth Abounds.....
This Is Love.....for certain a love permeating depths of the very soul.
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
A thought recreated a moment of Love
A moment of tenderness, an unforgettable moment
and your pen created this short masterpiece.
Peace be with you Brother
Wow...this is definately one of your best my friend...the love, the yearning, the desire all coming together in answer to a lover's prayer...beautiful.
I have enjoyed the reading of "You came...I whispered" as a poem, but its closing lines:
...................................../
"like the branches of an old oak tree,
which were so empty for so long a time,
“You came” kept whispering “You came”
as my heart was listening to her heart."
......................................... < are simply great.
Ok my friend, should this poem not be reclassified in a different catagory ha, roamin the glomin again sailor, as usual. have you ever thought of making a movie? Blessings! Jasmin Horst
WHO WOULDN'T HAVE COME FOR THAT? I DEFINATELY WOULD HAVE BEEN THE FIRST IN LINE. Holy Cow Georg, what a write. You sure are a man with the love bug inside your heart. Lovely write. Love, Bonnie
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You have captured such beautiful vividness and
the long awaited second where lips met
Wow this kind of romance can melt a woman's heart!!
Brilliant Romantic write!!
Now I can read the next one
Peace Love and Light...Morning Star
Very Endearing Passions Embrace The Pages Of Your Den With This Lovely Poem....Warmth Abounds.....
This Is Love.....for certain a love permeating depths of the very soul.
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
A moment of tenderness, an unforgettable moment
and your pen created this short masterpiece.
Peace be with you Brother
William
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Carole~
Newfie hugs, Rose
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Be always safe,
Karen
Love,
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I have enjoyed the reading of "You came...I whispered" as a poem, but its closing lines:
...................................../
"like the branches of an old oak tree,
which were so empty for so long a time,
“You came” kept whispering “You came”
as my heart was listening to her heart."
......................................... < are simply great.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D