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Love, if you go away
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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Words, words coming through the mist that cover distances like a shroud, words that suddenly tells of someone, suddenly, like a shading gossamer enters the dense fog of absence with a full moon somewhere illuminating the path that takes her away from me...that can offer not a tear or even a protest from the dead heart that she will be leaving behind.


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Love, if you go away…


…and I look outside the window
there will be birds no more
or beautiful butterflies
in my world


…life will become totally empty
a house with closed doors
of steps the echoes
and a dead clock


…two candles will cease to burn
and time will come to a stop
as it will bleed hours
just for us


There will be nothing left for me
If you go away, my love,
you only will left me
an empty world


    

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 Reviews of "Love, if you go away"
Reviewed on April 25, 2009
With poems like these, who wants to leave? How many ladies did you write this for? It's so beautiful- all them blushing dames must have said yes.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on November 4, 2008
A beautiful LOVE OFFERING for the little red-haired girl! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
The emotions, thoughts that run through this beauty are explicitly amazing and so bone chillingly pure, a masterpiece to say the least....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Woooow Georg this is breathtaking write!
I love the tone the way the your words flow
Yes in a way its sad but "oh so beautiful!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and Light...Morning Star


Reviewed by supriya dixit (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
exquisite need.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Excellent yet sad write
Of an empty heart
Peace be with you Brother
Most enjoyable write

William

Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Love - the great liberator, the great destroyer. Wonderful poem my friend. I wish you love that never goes away.
Hugs,
Marcia

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Exquisite sadness in this beautiful poem, Georg!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Without love, you will be nothing. This is so true!!!

Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Your imagery is superb, Georg...
Is this one of your paintings??
It is stunning!
Cryssa

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
nicely done

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
I know these feelings. Have known them. I'm still waiting for the birds to return. Sometimes I think I hear them but I haven't seen them yet. Maybe someday. An excellent write, Georg, that went straight to my heart.

Rebecca

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Awwww! Gorgeous display of love and longing... the whole clock bleeding hours things had me stunned. --Charlie

Reviewed on November 3, 2008
I am so glad, I left off reading this last night, I know I needed all my strengths in the morning, and I sure did. You truly are a soldier of the heart my friend. Thems Canucks, not know the subtleties in those fine bred american lines, but me thinks, they are pulling your leg eh? Blessings great Poet! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Well, this is Breath Taking darlin..what a loving heart you have...I certainly hope the love in your life knows what a very sweet, loving man you are...sighhhhhh ...keep smiling sweet man..because you always make me smile ..be well and safe always sweet Georg....Hugsssssssss
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxo

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Georg,
Very moving write! I hope she stays and fills your heart with love and joy.

Blessings and Love,
~Linda

Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Dear Heart may you always be embraced and enlightened by love.

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
emotionally beautiful.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Then I hope she never goes away, brother.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Typos Shmipos. Fuggid about them and savor the feeling instead.
One cannot typo feelings. And feelings do pervade this piece. Did you do an absentee ballot Georg?

Walt

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Okay, typos...
You leave me with not choice...
You left me with no a choice...
And we come back to that battle about saying I instead of me and the all going hullabaloo about which one is correct potâto-potato and tomâto-tomato?
Left of leave it to a turncoat Canuck to stir trouble.


Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
This is absolutely, incredibly one of your best ever Georg...the depth of emotional sadness of such a perceived loss is overwhelming in each stanza of this poem. You outdie yourself.

Fee
PS: one little typo, in last verse second last line...change left to leave

Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Wonderful write, Georg; and love the piccy! Well done, (((My friend))), well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Beautifully romantic. thanks dear George

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Georg this is beautiful. My husband told me I have to take care of myself for his life without me would be empty, cold and silent. He claims I am his star that shines and the reason for his every breath and your words remind me of a true caring love through each word, whaich could be only meant for someone very precious. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Maybe you and Bonnie can get together, now there's a match made in hell...LOL, Ed

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Very romantic, very sad and very beautiful!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
What a love is in that soul of yours, that woman would be so loved and cherished, she would never even think of leaving. She's be a very lucky gal. Love and hugs, Bonnie


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