Words, words coming through the mist that cover distances like a shroud, words that suddenly tells of someone, suddenly, like a shading gossamer enters the dense fog of absence with a full moon somewhere illuminating the path that takes her away from me...that can offer not a tear or even a protest from the dead heart that she will be leaving behind.
Love, if you go away…
…and I look outside the window
there will be birds no more
or beautiful butterflies
in my world
…life will become totally empty
a house with closed doors
of steps the echoes
and a dead clock
…two candles will cease to burn
and time will come to a stop
as it will bleed hours
just for us
There will be nothing left for me
If you go away, my love,
you only will left me
an empty world
Woooow Georg this is breathtaking write!
I love the tone the way the your words flow
Yes in a way its sad but "oh so beautiful!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and Light...Morning Star
I know these feelings. Have known them. I'm still waiting for the birds to return. Sometimes I think I hear them but I haven't seen them yet. Maybe someday. An excellent write, Georg, that went straight to my heart.
I am so glad, I left off reading this last night, I know I needed all my strengths in the morning, and I sure did. You truly are a soldier of the heart my friend. Thems Canucks, not know the subtleties in those fine bred american lines, but me thinks, they are pulling your leg eh? Blessings great Poet! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Well, this is Breath Taking darlin..what a loving heart you have...I certainly hope the love in your life knows what a very sweet, loving man you are...sighhhhhh ...keep smiling sweet man..because you always make me smile ..be well and safe always sweet Georg....Hugsssssssss
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxo
Typos Shmipos. Fuggid about them and savor the feeling instead.
One cannot typo feelings. And feelings do pervade this piece. Did you do an absentee ballot Georg?
Okay, typos...
You leave me with not choice...
You left me with no a choice...
And we come back to that battle about saying I instead of me and the all going hullabaloo about which one is correct potâto-potato and tomâto-tomato?
Left of leave it to a turncoat Canuck to stir trouble.
This is absolutely, incredibly one of your best ever Georg...the depth of emotional sadness of such a perceived loss is overwhelming in each stanza of this poem. You outdie yourself.
Fee
PS: one little typo, in last verse second last line...change left to leave
Georg this is beautiful. My husband told me I have to take care of myself for his life without me would be empty, cold and silent. He claims I am his star that shines and the reason for his every breath and your words remind me of a true caring love through each word, whaich could be only meant for someone very precious. Thank you for sharing.
What a love is in that soul of yours, that woman would be so loved and cherished, she would never even think of leaving. She's be a very lucky gal. Love and hugs, Bonnie
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Cynthia
Be always safe,
Karen
I love the tone the way the your words flow
Yes in a way its sad but "oh so beautiful!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and Light...Morning Star
Of an empty heart
Peace be with you Brother
Most enjoyable write
William
Hugs,
Marcia
Love,
Eileen
Sandie Angel :o(
Is this one of your paintings??
It is stunning!
Cryssa
Rebecca
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxo
Very moving write! I hope she stays and fills your heart with love and joy.
Blessings and Love,
~Linda
One cannot typo feelings. And feelings do pervade this piece. Did you do an absentee ballot Georg?
Walt
You leave me with not choice...
You left me with no a choice...
And we come back to that battle about saying I instead of me and the all going hullabaloo about which one is correct potâto-potato and tomâto-tomato?
Left of leave it to a turncoat Canuck to stir trouble.
Fee
PS: one little typo, in last verse second last line...change left to leave
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Newfie Hugs, Rose